The Beginning of Man

As the morning breaks and day begins
The sun ascends to the sky
A whole new day is born again
Like the billions that have done gone by

The sea waves crash into the rocks
As they have done since time began
And soak the sand on beaches
And to the sea they’ll return again

Forest covered earth is home
To a million animals and plants
That live and feed off of each other
The circle of life is constant

The sky filled with every kind of bird
A breathtaking view it is.
As life goes about its own way
For millions of years like this.

Then God created a different type
Of animal that came to be
The ruler over all the earth
He would name every plant and tree.

God would call his creation man
He would live in paradise
Then create woman from mans rib 
They’d walk side by side.

Bound to God and Gods rules
And never to eat from the forbidden tree
But man being man being tempted
His desires would be set free

As they ate the forbidden fruit
Their minds began to see
Their innocence had disappeared
Their lives changed dramatically

Cast out from the Garden Of Eden
Man and woman had to make their own way
They were given a shot at paradise
But like man they threw it away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/22/2017 1:10:00 PM
Well said and nicely portrayed !!
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 4/22/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly ma'am.
Date: 3/4/2017 9:18:00 AM
True words Ricky, nice reminder of Mans folly, history repeats itself as humans display selfishness, and continue to reject God's directions and standards, hence the world is as we know it. Nice write.
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 3/6/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words sir. I hope you enjoy the rest of my poems.
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