The Begging Wealthy Man

Once a man, an elderly 
Was in the sunshine begging
His face was dim and dry to see
Unshaven, unappealing
And as I stared he came to me. 

Trembling hands reached out to me
As I stood there observing
But I did not feel pity, see,
His ugliness emanating
I wished to, from the old man, flee.

From my hands, it fell in his,
A penny, mere, a penny,
He stared at it and saw it is
The most expectable from me
And wondered to the sky, what bliss!

But then as days went by and by
My heart remembered more
It filled my nights with many sighs
Of guilt for being sore
And to myself, I wondered, “Why?” 

But then a friend of mine, I met
Who told me such a story
Of when there was a rich man yet
Who fell to such great misery 
And who’s to know his fate he met?

I wondered, why I hadn’t seen 
The handsome wealthy man behind
The shaggy clothes and eyes so keen. 
Then I went, the fellow, to find,
And smiled at him.. I wasn’t mean.

That little smile was meant to be
A clearly thought apology
For having been so cruelly blind
To how a man can sometimes find
A fate as bad that changes lives!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Simon Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Thanks Debbie!!
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August 2, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your win, Stenila. Love, Joyce
Simon Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Thank you so much Joyce! :)
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August 2, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Congrats on your win Stenila...happy for you. - Well done. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Simon Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much annelise for your kind comments!
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your 4th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Stenila. Love, Carol
Simon Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, It's such an honor!
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August 1, 2012 at 11:49 PM
Stenila,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
Simon Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 6:25 AM
Thank you so much for your support everyone!
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July 18, 2012 at 8:54 AM
There is a lot of excellence in this poem, but it sounds unfinished. You need a concluding stanza that either sums it up, or reflects on the meaning of the meeting. I hope you'll seize the moment, here. -Dean
Simon Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Thank you so much, Robert! That's just the kind of advice I was looking for. I also thought there was something missing, but couldn't quite figure out what. Thank you again so much for your wonderful advice! I'll make it better and post it and I hope you come again to read the new better version!
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July 18, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Great story! ~Tammy~
Simon Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Thanks a lot Tammy!
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