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The Begging Wealthy Man

Once a man, an elderly Was in the sunshine begging His face was dim and dry to see Unshaven, unappealing And as I stared he came to me. Trembling hands reached out to me As I stood there observing But I did not feel pity, see, His ugliness emanating I wished to, from the old man, flee. From my hands, it fell in his, A penny, mere, a penny, He stared at it and saw it is The most expectable from me And wondered to the sky, what bliss! But then as days went by and by My heart remembered more It filled my nights with many sighs Of guilt for being sore And to myself, I wondered, “Why?” But then a friend of mine, I met Who told me such a story Of when there was a rich man yet Who fell to such great misery And who’s to know his fate he met? I wondered, why I hadn’t seen The handsome wealthy man behind The shaggy clothes and eyes so keen. Then I went, the fellow, to find, And smiled at him.. I wasn’t mean. That little smile was meant to be A clearly thought apology For having been so cruelly blind To how a man can sometimes find A fate as bad that changes lives!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 6:27:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/3/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Debbie!!
Date: 8/2/2012 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Stenila. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/3/2015 11:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyce! :)
Date: 8/2/2012 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win Stenila...happy for you. - Well done. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2012 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much annelise for your kind comments!
Date: 8/2/2012 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your 4th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Stenila. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2012 6:25:00 AM
Thank you, It's such an honor!
Date: 8/1/2012 11:49:00 PM
Stenila,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
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Stenila Simon
Date: 8/2/2012 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support everyone!
Date: 7/18/2012 8:54:00 AM
There is a lot of excellence in this poem, but it sounds unfinished. You need a concluding stanza that either sums it up, or reflects on the meaning of the meeting. I hope you'll seize the moment, here. -Dean
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Stenila Simon
Date: 7/18/2012 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert! That's just the kind of advice I was looking for. I also thought there was something missing, but couldn't quite figure out what. Thank you again so much for your wonderful advice! I'll make it better and post it and I hope you come again to read the new better version!
Date: 7/18/2012 8:46:00 AM
Great story! ~Tammy~
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Stenila Simon
Date: 7/18/2012 11:22:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tammy!

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