The Begger

Hellloooo inside there I can see you The prospect of food and my brave grew It’s getting quite cold Hence why I’m so bold Won’t you kindly spare a nut or two?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2018 9:56:00 AM

So cute! Poem and picture.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/8/2017 8:17:00 PM

Judith, such a great, creative write and a wonderful photo too - irresistible! I enjoyed both.

Judith S
Date: 12/9/2017 5:39:00 AM

Thank you Susan!! I so appreciate your visit :) Best, Judy

John Lawless

Date: 12/7/2017 7:00:00 PM

A pleading Limerick.....this could be a first. Also a nice bit of personification. and a cute little devil to boot.

Judith S
Date: 12/7/2017 7:50:00 PM

Haha ... thank you John! Don't ALL squirrels plead in limerick?? Appreciate you reading :) Best, Judy

James Swartz

Date: 12/6/2017 8:54:00 PM

That's so cute. And a great narrative brought out by your creativity. A wonderful poem. Did you feed the cute beggar?

Judith S
Date: 12/6/2017 9:02:00 PM

Thank you James!! I absolutely did not feed him .. because although they are cute, they are a nuisance. Just like chipmunks!! Appreciate your visit! ~ Judy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2017 3:14:00 PM

this is so cute, Judith. I found out recently they are referred to as tree rats in my sister's state. Gosh I had never seen them as rats before. I guess I like the rodent family!!

Judith S
Date: 12/6/2017 7:38:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. They are kind of cute ... but a nuisance. This one was just too adorable to NOT take his picture :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/1/2017 9:30:00 AM

This is adorable, Judy! and I love squirrels, so sweet xxoo

Judith S
Date: 12/1/2017 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Mike!! :)

Lewis Raynes

Date: 11/30/2017 7:45:00 PM

I love this small little poem Judy, great stuff.

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 8:16:00 PM

Thanks Lewis ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2017 5:30:00 PM

aww how cute!:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2017 2:01:00 PM

- How adorable - Lovely written, Judith - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 2:20:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) Appreciate you reading. ~ Judy

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/30/2017 1:20:00 PM

Aw, such a sweet poem, Judy. I feed the birds and squirrels in wintertime. Tho' the little fellas have to wait til I bring my dogs in. My dogs don't bother the birds however. Beaut of a pic. Very personable poem, easy as grace. Love and smiles always.

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 2:19:00 PM

The birds need the sustainance in the winter. And they are so beautiful to watch on the feeder at any time of year :) Thanks for your always kind comments Freddie!!

Silent One

Date: 11/30/2017 1:13:00 PM

Great limerick! Hope you gave the little fella something to eat. Great photo also.

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I feed the birds .. and the squirrels help themselves lol. If I fed that little guy ... I'd have 20 more out there tomorrow!!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/30/2017 12:43:00 PM

very cute...I bought the squirrels a bag of peanuts today...I have a family of 4 that plays in my yard.

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 2:15:00 PM

They do love nuts! Thanks for reading Tim.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/30/2017 11:49:00 AM

Beautiful picture--you read her mind well--and did she gets some nuts??

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 11:58:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! I don't feed the squirrels because they already come in abundance to my bird feeders lol! They're pesky little creatures but very cute! Best, Judy

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 11/30/2017 11:49:00 AM

Nice poem Judith!

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Kudzai!

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/30/2017 10:21:00 AM

A great message...especially around this time of the year....All the best, Judith

Judith S
Date: 11/30/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Arturo !!! Always nice to hear from you :) ~ Judy