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the bee to become

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I'll be free to kind-ness of daisies
gently trembling through the void,
and the softness of  held hands
which are offering raisins,
without a trick of quicksand.
There's seeds that has a need
of watering & the showering,
Grows into roses with its thorns
defense mechanism vulnerability
can be sweet and leave you torn.
A mother cradles her newborn
and will show her teeth
if you interrupt her breath
into her child's new lungs,
and a simple harmony sang
She's now a bee to become....

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Date: 8/21/2025 4:49:00 PM
enjoyed your imagery...and the beautiful flow of your poem. It spoke to me as well. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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