The Bee in the Garden



                       My three-year-old son stood next to me

                        as I watered our garden of flowers

                          The zinnias nodded their blossoms

                      As if grateful for garden hose showers

                     A firework array, was that garden display               

                                Of pinks, yellows, orange, 

                                       Purple, red

                      When my son asked the cutest of

                                 Questions to me

                        In the darlingest way ever said

                     As he eyed that large bumbling bee

                 That he found alarmingly too close to me

                Not quite in fear, as its buzzing drew near

                     And it sampled of pollens so dear

              But at his first sight of that yellow bright fuzz 

          And the loud droning volume of that giant bee's buzz
            
                    He just needed to know all was right
                 
                                      He asked

                    "Mommy? Do humming bee's bite?"
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Miller Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:03 AM
Wonderful and so very true a belated congrats on your POTD
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Thank you so much Terry, I appreciate your belated congrats, your encouragement, and your visit :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 8:00 AM
hi BJ this is such a thankful poem, a poem of grattude with nature, your darling little boy next to you, what more could you possibly wish for at that time, in your garden and the buzzing bee, what a cute obvious question, I loved the serenity of this poem, a most deserved POTD Congratulations dear friend, Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer, it is such a precious memory to me. It is such a blessing that we have the gift of memories when the children grow up. He now has two children of his own, and they remind me a lot of their daddy :) It was so nice to read your comment, I'm so sorry my reply is so late. I hope you are doing well <3Hugs and blessings to you as well!
Godwin Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 7:53 PM
This poem is as sweet as honey! So well put together to pour the honey out ... CayCay
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:49 AM
Aw, thank you so much CayCay! It is a very sweet memory to me :)
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Dearest BJ, Oh, my dear friend, the gentle wonder of childhood and the lushness of a garden in bloom. I felt the zinnias’ gratitude, the firework colors, and your son’s wide-eyed curiosity with a moment suspended between innocence and the wild of life. BJ you captured the sweetness of connection, the small joys that root us. Where even a bee’s buzz becomes a memory in blossom. Spring Blessings, My Dearest BJ, Daniel
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:48 AM
Aw, thank you so much Daniel. Your very encouraging comment blesses my heart. I am so sorry I am so late getting back to you. I was off the site for such a long space of time but trying to catch up now. It is so uplifting to read your message from your visit. I hope you are doing well :)
Rose  Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 4:30 AM
lol that is a good one, a perfect example how children have no fear until we introduce them to it, love it , a fav for me,
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:58 AM
Yes, he was so cute!! He is not afraid of insects or animals, in fact, his father-in-law actually loves and respects all nature, fascinated with rattle snakes, yikes! He rescues the scariest critters, my son is not that far behind :)
Rose  Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 4:30 AM
I'd like to know what you said, :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Hahaha, I said "Baby, run!!!" and swooped him up in my arms as the Herculine bee did a suicide dive bomb toward us ;) No, really, I said he was fine, just don't try to catch him :) <3
Tor Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:30 PM
This is lovely BJ sorry I was late to the party. Been away. Congratulations!!! Such a beautiful Poem so much enjoyed. Again Congratulations!!!!!!!!!
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Thank you Michael, I have been mia for a lot of the summer, but I truly appreciate your visit and comment. I am trying to catch up, I'm afraid it will take me awhile. I came over to your site the other day, as I actually enjoy reading everyone's poems and then get further behind on my replies when I am on here, I noticed that you have not posted in quite some time. I hope you are doing ok.
Maverick Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Good to see you achieved potd with this rich And relatable poem B J.'
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Thank you Joe! Sorry for the late reply, your comments and visits are always appreciated. :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:04 AM
A tender moment BJ, belated congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. I'm taking a break at the moment as I'm busy doing a slideshow for a forthcoming family reunion. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Yes, it was a sweet moment, so long ago. This was a wonderful surprise, and I was so blessed that this received a POTD :) I too have been gone for quite some time, but I am back and trying to catch up, so this is a very belated reply to your uplifting comment and visit. I hope your family reunion went well. Sounds fun!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Congrats on POTD. Well deserved
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :) <3
Anaya Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations, BJ on POTD! Moments truly special, colorful blooms, and innocence. I am charmed. Enjoy~ Xhugs
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much Anaya :) It is a sweet memory of a beautiful spring day and my son, I am glad you like it! Thank you for your visit and uplifting comment, hugs to you as well! :) <3
Nicole Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 2:06 PM
Dear Bj, your words are a delight to embrace and they bring a smile to my face. :) Such a cute thing for your son to say, ' do humming bee's bite ? ' Ouch, oh yes they do. A belated congratulations to you on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much Brandy, I am glad my memory brought you a smile as it has for me. Yes, that was so cute, "Do humming bees bite?" :D Well, their sting is worse than their bite, that is for certain! Your visit and comment today has made me smile, thank you so much :) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Back with Congrats!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 8:19 PM
:) <3 Thank you Kim! And thank you for sharing about your daughter's purple Oshkosh B' Gosh! Weren't they the cutest and longest lasting little outfits? I wonder if they still make them, I should look and purchase some for my son's little boy and new daughter, he will have blue, and she maybe pink or purple, how adorable :) <3
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Dear BJ, Congrats on POTD as you beautifully capture that precious moment between mother and child so full of wonder. I love how the garden blooms with color and life, and how your son’s innocent question brings a gentle humor and warmth. It’s a perfect snapshot of love, curiosity, and the little surprises in everyday life. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Daniel for your very uplifting comment and your visit along with your congratulation, I so appreciate! It is wonderful to have this sweet memory; it was so adorable. There are so many sweet memories, but this is truly a very treasured one, like a snapshot in my heart to treasure always :)
Grubb Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:05 PM
I read this to my five-year-old grandson. He loved it; and, so did I. Congrats on your POTD, BJ.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:24 PM
Thank you so much Mickey, I am so honored and blessed by your comment on my poem, and really happy you and your five-year-old grandson loved it, that means so much to me and makes me smile even more than receiving this wonderful POTD! Thank you so much!
Sands Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:39 AM
So very sweet! Congratulations for POTD :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:28 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, I am so blessed! :) <3
Man Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:29 AM
I'm so excited for you.. Poem Of The Day is a wonderful accomplishment. This one is well written and super cute. You made this poet smile and I'm sure many others. What a craft to bring others joy. Thank you! Check me out when you get a chance and maybe we can do a collaboration some time. I also love to write echoes to love poems if you do those.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:34 PM
Thank you so much, I am truly blessed and honored by this POTD! My son is so precious to us till this day, and this makes me so happy that the wonderful day of so very long ago is highlighted by this honor. I am not too good with collaborations, but I will look at your poems. I love writing love poems about my husband, and written many after our long marriage, he is definitely one of my favorite subjects :) Thank you so much for you comment and congratulations!
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Congrats on POTD! I thought this poem was so cute.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so very much Paige, I am truly so honored and blessed by this POTD honor! My son will be excited to learn that this memory of him has received this award :) I am so happy :) <3
Kitchin Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:03 AM
BJ, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:48 PM
Thank you so much Tanya, it is such a precious memory to me and this honor highlights that sweet moment so long ago of my son and his cute question :) I appreciate your visit and comment of congratulations! <3
Lane Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 3:10 AM
That really is darling, Bj and a moment worth remembering. Thank you for sharing it with us and congratulations for it being chosen as today's POTD.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:53 PM
Thank you so much Lin, I am so incredibly blessed that this precious moment has been heightened by this honor :) I know he will be happy to know his cuteness from his toddlerhood has earned this POTD. I so appreciate your visit and comment of congratulations :) <3
Edmonds  Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 2:43 AM
That’s so lovely and a treasured memory. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day Bj… Beryl
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Thank you so much Beryl, for your visit and congratulatory comment. I am truly blessed and so happy to receive this POTD honor. This whole day was just really a happy and peaceful one visiting with a daughter and granddaughter and then to be so utterly surprised and blessed with this tonight, like sweet icing to top off a lovely day. My son will be happy too, I can hardly wait to tell him :)
Seeker Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Cutie pie :) congratulations on POTD with this joyful write :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 12:01 AM
Aw, he was, such a little darling! He is now a grown man with two precious children of his own, and they too are truly cutie pies. I am really honored with this POTD and can hardly wait to tell my son that his adorable question to me about that bumble bee has blessed his mama all these years later. Thank you for your visit and comment :)
Gifford Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 2:29 AM
Hello BJ, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely story. Have a wonderful day.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 12:03 AM
Thank you so very much Zyrool, I am incredibly honored by this POTD as well as your very uplifting comment and visit to my poem :)
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 1:37 AM
- Beautiful poem, Bj :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your sweet comment and congratulations, I appreciate you dropping by so much, and so excited for POTD on this poem :) <3
Jones Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Awwwwe so sweet! I enjoyed your potd write! Congratulations Bj!
Jones Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 3:41 AM
What a wonderful inspiration! I’m sure he will be thrilled to know!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 12:56 AM
Thank you so much Karen! I am so excited and blessed by this POTD on my poem and can't wait to tell my son how that adorable question about the 'humming bee' so very long ago would end up inspiring this poem and high honor :) I am absolutely ecstatic <3 Your visit and sweet comment has totally blessed me :)
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