The Bee

Grey bee on a rose Looking for golden honey Quick! asks sinking sun __________________________________ 5/12/2016

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2016 12:37:00 PM

Love the Haiku perfect form, hurry little bee before I go down :) Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/6/2016 4:37:00 AM

Nice ... Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/5/2016 8:38:00 AM

The ordinary looks for something beautiful before his life disappears. Does he ask too much? Interesting haiku

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 9:04:00 AM

Of course no ... thanks ...

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2016 7:18:00 AM

Your poem presents a lovely image, Probir. A while ago I was out in the garden watching bees on the white blossoms of my Japanese medlar tree. ~ Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 7:48:00 AM

Thank you ... However, I may add that the bee and honey gathering are multi metaphor , so is the monitoring sun ... Regards ... probir ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/5/2016 5:03:00 AM

Since I am a gardener and have roses and bees visit me I think I can comment objectively and not as...usual: Perfect dear, Probir!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2016 10:06:00 AM

Impossible! haha! My roses have got the best nectar my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 7:58:00 AM

Well, Thank you ... but it may very much be possible that the bee is in pursuit of a different rose that is not there in your garden ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2016 4:20:00 AM

- A great haiku, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 4:36:00 AM

Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 12/4/2016 9:42:00 PM

A great metaphor, Probir, very clever and poetic!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 4:42:00 AM

Thanks for liking ...