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The Bee

Grey bee on a rose Looking for golden honey Quick! asks sinking sun __________________________________ 5/12/2016

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Date: 12/5/2016 12:37:00 PM
Love the Haiku perfect form, hurry little bee before I go down :) Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/6/2016 4:37:00 AM
Nice ... Thank you ...
Date: 12/5/2016 8:38:00 AM
The ordinary looks for something beautiful before his life disappears. Does he ask too much? Interesting haiku
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 9:04:00 AM
Of course no ... thanks ...
Date: 12/5/2016 7:18:00 AM
Your poem presents a lovely image, Probir. A while ago I was out in the garden watching bees on the white blossoms of my Japanese medlar tree. ~ Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you ... However, I may add that the bee and honey gathering are multi metaphor , so is the monitoring sun ... Regards ... probir ...
Date: 12/5/2016 5:03:00 AM
Since I am a gardener and have roses and bees visit me I think I can comment objectively and not as...usual: Perfect dear, Probir!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/5/2016 10:06:00 AM
Impossible! haha! My roses have got the best nectar my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 7:58:00 AM
Well, Thank you ... but it may very much be possible that the bee is in pursuit of a different rose that is not there in your garden ...
Date: 12/4/2016 9:42:00 PM
A great metaphor, Probir, very clever and poetic!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2016 4:42:00 AM
Thanks for liking ...