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The Bee - Show Me Funny Contest

He sat there with a bee on his nose Its his own fault this has occurred Stuck his nose in the lavender Now covered in pollen, looks absurd His eyes are near crossed As he looks at the bee Thinking dare i move Or will the blighter sting me So like a statue the dog just sat Dare i tell him the bee is a fake Was put in the lavender as a joke Will he hate me when from his nose i take. Penned 9 july 2013  Andrea's Contest :Show Me Funny

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Date: 7/9/2013 6:48:00 AM
I got the point... very funny... Terry
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Date: 7/8/2013 10:08:00 PM
Unless you find out that your forgot that you didn't put the fake bee on there...and then grabbed the bee...ouch! I loved this write and how it progressed, My favorite stanza is the second stanza, it flowed so very well and was a good overall stanza! I loved reading the delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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