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The Beauty of Change

“Beauty is change; change is beauty.” ~Quote by poet ~ A crystal dew glistens … on a thin blade of grass, And sighs bruising her eyes, feeling the rising sun; Grins a bubbling bud of rose, at withering glass Of dew … and cheers the rising sun to haste his run. A wriggling worm tiptoes toward a wrinkling rose, And hisses she may sleep in a pretty casket, And mimics, he can read an elegiac prose, Or she can ride with him in a ... bamboo basket. Picks a magpie the wriggling worm on its swift flight, An attribute to Bacchus, the lover of wine, A swift runner this magpie is, the prince of night; I dream of him lying dead with his broken spine, And a day’s mirage of beauty, ends with sun's fall Into a dead end, losing his glamour of reign, Mocking at clamour of men, draping a gray pall On the coffin of day’s beauty, saying, “in vain”. A crystal dew glistens … on a thin blade of grass; A wriggling worm tiptoes toward a wrinkling rose; Picks a magpie the wriggling worm on its swift flight, And a day’s mirage of beauty, ends with sun's fall. Syllabic count: 12 in each line (Ref. howmanysyllables.com) March 8, 2021 ALL YOURS (Mar 9) Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Brian Strand *A 1st Place* in the following contest (Judged on Dec. 13, 2020) Dec. 1, 2020 My Created Form Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Constant La France

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Date: 12/15/2020 4:00:00 PM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for the great comment and the placement!!
Date: 12/13/2020 6:42:00 PM
Wow! Beautiful portrayal through words :)
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Date: 12/13/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, US, for this great comment!!
Date: 12/13/2020 2:54:00 PM
WoW!Newton, What a beautiful well-written write and vibrant nature write! Your imagery is so vivid! Everything is lovely. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/13/2020 3:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for this impressively great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 12/5/2020 8:15:00 AM
I like the repeating of the first lines as the last stanza of this very descriptive work. Thanks for all the visits to my page ..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2020 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this impressively encouraging and sweet comment!!
Date: 12/4/2020 2:48:00 AM
A superb creation Newton, it’s a changing world that’s constantly twirling, so many beauteous wonders unfurling... Belle
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Date: 12/4/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this immensely great comment!!

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