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The Beauty Mother Nature Embraces

I see the beauty of the sangria sun setting in the west, the chartreuse leaflets upon my white rose bush flourish- The tiny little robins have started a family in their nest, as mother nature begins to tenderly blossom and nourish. The chartreuse leaflets upon my white rose bush flourish, I’m hoping my chrysanthemums will turn bright pink, as mother nature begins to tenderly blossom and nourish, my mossy vines intertwine and embrace with each link. I’m hoping my chrysanthemums will turn bright pink, I’m astounded once again by the majestic peaceful scenery, I sit out on my cabana with admiration and start to think, how wonderful it set sights on such hues and greenery! I’m astounded once again by the majestic peaceful scenery, the tiny little robins have started a family in their nest- How wonderful it set sights on such hues and greenery! I see the beauty of the sangria sun setting in the west. Rhyme Battle: Round 7 May 31, 2017

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Date: 6/28/2017 4:34:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:39:00 PM
Lovely, and congratulations on your placement in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 6/4/2017 8:37:00 PM
What a delightful painting of Early Summer you have painted with your pen! Simply stunning! Congratulations to you Laura and to your pen!!
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Date: 6/1/2017 6:14:00 AM
Hello Laura. Good Morning. You say the beauty mother nature embraces. I say the beauty words embrace. You have captured this moment in time and yes mother nature wonderfully. This entry is thought out and has attention to detail. Wonderful work in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 5/31/2017 7:58:00 PM
Laura Can i get ur email i cant find it anywhere, the thing is u are such a good poet and am lacking so much so i dont know if u could teach me a little more abput poet like this o e you killed it... O hope u see this Thanks Chris..
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Date: 5/31/2017 6:49:00 PM
absolutely beautiful pantoum Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2017 8:51:00 AM
You have done an exceptional job here, Laura! I saw this contest and thought of having a go! But now after reading yours! No way! Haha! Maybe in ten years time if I start practicing now! Best of luck to you
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