The Beauty

The Beauty
Your beauty is so breathtaking that even the sun comes back day after day half-awake after a restless night using the mountains as camouflage until it wakes up completely to see your beauty with its own bright eyes. If I were the sun, I would bow before your presence and I would shower the morning with kisses which would be in the form of sunlight warming your hands, touching your eyes with my sunlight receding off your eyes for the whole world to see the glow in your eyes. Your beauty is so radiant that even the moon comes back night after night with a afternoon nap as the only rest to try and out shine you. If I was the moon I would kiss the ground you walk on with my luminous light so that you may perhaps come out at night so that I may perhaps have a moment to stare at your beauty the only problem is that I am shy and perhaps you would make me blush more some nights than other nights till eventually I have a full blush for the world to see how bright you make me feel. Copyright @ 2012 Rogelio Munoz
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Date: 9/20/2012 4:11:00 AM
Yes, that's what I said .... you are good at writing poetry. This is gorgeous. - I'll also send you an S-mail. - Oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:33:00 AM
Wow! Lovely write Rogelio! Love how you've used the sun and the moon to emphasize the beauty's essence. And the part about blushing - excellent. Nice! Very nice!
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:27:00 AM
I am glad you like it :). I have about 36 poems and have been working on a book. I wanted to share a few of the poems I wrote on the website. I have only posted 2 poems so far. I will try to add a few more poems to the website.
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