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The Beautiful Rose

I have a tale to tell to you Of a love which ruin'd my life. It is a tale of caution, too, So heed my grave advice: Strolling through the woods one day To rid my mind of woe, I did spy a red rose that lay Betwixt the sky and snow. Oh, what joy was it to find This rose so delicate and free. I was certain Mother would not mind If She simply lent to me. The flower became mine. To be for me alone. But the sun would not shine If only had it known. I then gave my life to it, That beautiful red rose. The stars became less elegant, And time began to slow. No more did family matter, No more did my needs. But the illusion soon shattered, For my rose had sewn no seeds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2012 11:51:00 PM
I see this entry won in Carol's contest. Congratulations. This has pervasively clear descriptiveness.
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:29:00 PM
Very well written....congrats on your win
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:42:00 PM
A new form that I have never tried Daniel. a beautiful work that you have made of it though. Congratulations on your front row seat in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:03:00 AM
No seeds. A true let down. Congratulations on your high placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:36:00 AM
Great line here Daniel. Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Daniel. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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