The Beast Within

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The beast that sleeps within, As he prowls and shadows sin… He bellows with a raging roar, Salivating the gathered gore. The beast hides upon my sleep, Waking wounds touching deep… When alert he stands proud, An Alpha male well endowed. For now, I see a little kitten, Twice shy and once bitten… Thus beauty calms the beast, The fury has been released. ___________________________ June.07.2020 Spirit Animal Sponsored by Dear Heart Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 6/12/2020 10:52:00 AM
WW, congratulations on your win in my spirit contest with this beautifully written and read poem. Yes, even the mighty lion began life as a helpless kit, and I like your video also _Constance
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Date: 6/8/2020 3:22:00 PM
congratulate you on your win. Great Write. Love your action picture. You made your poem come to life. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 6/8/2020 10:25:00 AM
I'm also August, but Virgo, the 28th - they say we are a pain because we are perfectionists - like that you are puuurfect and yet have a Lions heart ,big bold and kind! Blessings and hugs Jennster. Congratulations on your top win my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2020 8:44:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Wingster :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 10:38:00 PM
A thoughtful piece...loved "the beast hides upon my sleep...waking wounds touching deep...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:58:00 AM
The last two writes... were the poet in you...weaving words for effect...Nice
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:02:00 AM
I love the little kitten getting transformed into an Alpha male, the beast. :D Enjoyed the purrs and the fury. Best wishes Wingster :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:35:00 AM
Stick to the kitten my friend... Meow....
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:53:00 AM
I'm a true LEO (born Aug, 3'rd )...so I'm a bit of both...a purrrfect place to be lol...thanks for dropping by my silent friend...^WW^ :o)
Date: 6/7/2020 7:31:00 AM
Very nice WW. I enjoyed reading and listening to this. I hope you are feeling better. Take care!
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:42:00 AM
Hi, Heidi...thanks for dropping by...I still have cold-like symptoms...just finished taking horse tranquilizers( huge pills ) lol...my doctor thinks I might have Nasal polyps...if antibiotics don't work...I might need surgery to remove them...hope you are OK my friend...love & Hugs...^WW^ :o)
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