The Beast

I hate the killer in me Love the killer of me Hate the me in me Love the killer Me By: Tawny Kelley

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/30/2014 7:45:00 PM

beautifully drawn dear pal

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/1/2014 12:20:00 PM

Thank-you Liam ~ This is my Beautiful daughter Tawny Marie ~

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/7/2014 1:26:00 AM

Wow! This is such an impressive piece with a deep powerful message! Excellent write! Pandita

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/1/2014 12:22:00 PM

Thank-you ! My Beautiful daughter wrote "The Beast " Selfish " she is amazing !! Thank-you for your comments , and i will get her on her own page now.

Keith Merritt

Date: 7/5/2014 10:51:00 AM

Of human natures this sums it up quite well. I love this, Shanity !

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/5/2014 11:20:00 AM

thank you darlin..however i can't take credit, for my beautiful, creative daughter wrote this and 'Selfish" encouraging her to open her own account.

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/4/2014 6:36:00 PM

nice write Shanity,

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/4/2014 7:32:00 PM

Thank-you Love, but it is my beautiful daughter , she does not think she is a poetess, so now ..she will know! Thank-you.