The Beach Firing Squad

And the old women trundle out along the beach, 
their snacks and drinks for sale, swinging like rifles
from their sore, wooden shoulders;

and others;  younger and pretty, do the same,
eager to learn… to  make a little money

and they joke when they see me watching ;
and stealing a smile, they throw me a potent
warning, saying, ”no money, no honey,”
and gently swing their brown hips away;

and the old women, lining up firing squad like, 
aim their high-caliber disapproval; winging 
my bruised ego:

so, hurt;  I retreat to the bar, and tell my friends
how crazy  women are;  and they feign sympathy, 
knowing I ‘m a wounded old fool.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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