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The Battle of Thermopylae - a Spartan Death Wish - 480 Bc

THE BATTLE OF THERMOPYLAE - A SPARTAN DEATH WISH - 480 BC 300 Spartans or hoplites , the truly heroic The loyal and totally patriotic, Were ordered to fight to the death, And To their very last breathe! King Leonidas had to stop the Persian Army and King Xerxes from capitulating Athens, but these 300 strong Were hopelessly outmatched, so wrong. In addition, a traitor was lurking around, Ephialtes knew he could find common ground With Persia’s King Xerxes, Ephialtes wanted money King Xerxes a conclusive win, a thought that wasn’t sunny! Ephialtes, a Judas, told the Persians about the pass To go around the mountain and surprise The Greeks from the back. Ephalites led them for he had the knack! King Xerxes sent his 10000 “immortals” on this mission, Xerxes himself put this mission into commission! Puzzling however, is that King Leonidas knew, The Persians were coming, yet ordered the hoplites to stay, And the supporting army to go away, Was this a deliberate act of self sacrifice, for an oracle Appeared, which confirmed that should King Leonidas die, And his honest, loyal soul soar to the sky, Sparta would not be destroyed, and another interpretation Was that King Leonidas wanted to give them time to escape, Which they did. The 300 Spartans left fought Bravely until each one dropped and they became naught! And what happened to our notorious, Traitor, Ephialtes – in Greek his name Means nightmare, Welcome nowhere, surely that’s fair! The Battle of Thermopylae, the bravery of King Leonidas Together with his 300, brave, strong and determined Hoplites have contributed to a beautiful and rich history, But the mystery Remains, why did they choose to stay and die, instead of Getting up to leave, Abandoning families that would surely grieve. The battle of Thermopylae took place in August 480 BC, A great historical era, to which only the Spartans had the key!

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Date: 4/9/2022 10:25:00 PM
Wow, Jennifer thank you for guiding me here, love the history, and flow of the poetry. I do wonder, trying to answer the question, about staying to the last man. 'That to die in battle was an honourable thing to do' and heaven awaits.
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Date: 3/27/2019 5:46:00 AM
A fabulous poem Jennifer. I love hearing about your family. Outstanding people! Panagiota
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/27/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hi Panagiota, thank you for reading my poems - I am falling behind with my my poetry work as our business is claiming more of my time and I am tron between the two. Isn't it our family - yes outstanding history, we should be proud. Keep well my friend and keep on writing your beautiful poems, Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Date: 1/21/2019 7:07:00 PM
I so love all Greek, Roman and Norse mythology my dear friend. Sending this to my fav list and yes the 300 Spartans gave a true and lasting view to future generations on what sacrifice to save others is truly like-- Heroic!
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Date: 1/22/2019 12:13:00 AM
My Grandfather was a poet and his father was commissioned in Turkey Constantinople, by the Library of Constantinople, to translate any Greek poems into Turkish, quite a feat, but he was also a poet. My Mother used to often tell me stories of when they lived in Turkey, really fascinating. They lived in Turkey until my mother was 11 years old, so she spoke Greek, Turkish and English. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/22/2019 12:02:00 AM
True heroes until their last breathe. Very content and happy that you enjoyed my poem. I love Greek mythology, and because of my half Greek heritage and the fact that I speak Greek fluently, have a great affinity toward Greece and its people. Poetry hugs Robert my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2019 9:31:00 AM
Well written historical verse Jennifer, I too like writing historical verse. Remember seeing that film the 300. Tom.
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Date: 1/15/2019 10:17:00 AM
Hi Tom, I didn't see that film - I don't how I missed it - will look it up. Give me History and Poetry and I'm in my element! Thank-you for the comment, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/14/2019 10:40:00 AM
Your narrative rightly gives prominence to the bravery of the loyal Spartan soldiers, Jenny. I love Greek history and have read a lot about it. Even Greek mythology can be very inspiring. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/14/2019 11:36:00 AM
Hi Paul, I must say Greek History and Greek Mythology fascinates me also. Even more so because I have visited Greece about 5 or 6 times and have been around a few of the Islands and up North. Up in the mountains is a Greek monastery on the top of mountains which you have to climb if you want to reach the top,(was a LOT younger when I attempted it) but absolutely amazing. Greece is well worth a holiday, but then of course you live in Malta, it must be like being on a constant holiday! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/14/2019 6:25:00 AM
WOW!! what more can I say my friend! Amazing, you have such talent Jennifer send me some.
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Date: 1/14/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for the "WOW" comment Bobby, You have amazing talent yourself, I could certainly do nothing to improve on it! Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 1/14/2019 1:51:00 AM
Really enjoyed the read! Well done Jennifer. I also would love to know why they stayed? A question and puzzle to always remain....Unsolved! Kim
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Date: 1/14/2019 2:10:00 AM
It was as if they they sacrificed themselves for King and Country. Brave men (but if it was me I would think of my family first). Thanks for lovely comments always Kim, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/13/2019 2:25:00 PM
You've done your homework well. That's quite a piece of history...well penned.
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Date: 1/14/2019 2:05:00 AM
Thank-you M.L, yes cant say I didn't, but Greek history fascinates and as I am half Greek, it is always interesting to learn more, Thank- you for your visit, I enjoy each one. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/13/2019 10:28:00 AM
The research that went into this missive astounds and amazes me. What a wonderful tale, and you tell it exceedingly well my friend!
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Date: 1/14/2019 2:01:00 AM
Thank-you Caren, always loved History but since Elias and I go married this has extended into Greek History and Greek mythology as he knows a lot about it himself also Glad you enjoyed - One day I will post my poem that is about the battle between myth and super heroes. Lots of poetry hugs, Jennifer.

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