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The Battle of Sunflower Hill

Akmed and Saleem where regulars in the neighborhood
Full of smiles and Arabic charm
Now they seem to all have but gone
Seems the young ones like to preach and fight
Nothing at all seems to work out right

Well the summer was hazy, the sun so hot
Gardens blooming, butterfly’s with champagne wings
Sunflowers making their journey on high
Kissing the sun, as the baker’s bread made us sigh

Then one morning the evil returned
Akmed and Saleem would make us dread
The beheaded slaughter, the bloody thirsty lust
These terrorists would not stop, no matter the fuss

The carnage was bloody, leg and limb lie all over
This battle was lost, before the morning was over
They destroyed all that was left in their tornado’s path
No mercy or begging would make them see the math

Tears flowed from my eyes
Sunflowers sliced and murdered
Beheaded in wars’ lustful pain
Those damn ISIS ones must bow in shame

It’s autumn
The crusades’ are over
We lost this bloody war
Those fanatic squirrels surely will be back for more!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Hahahaha....i too laughed out loud thinking about the series of thoughts went on in my mind while reading your poem..poor squirrels..in fact i love squirrels..its cute to watch them and their activities
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:23 PM
hahahahah.....anyway, this was a source of thought ;) perceptions differ know! :p
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:36 PM
yes but it made me smile, I was like those darn squirrels are flower terrorists!!!!
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Deep and awesome..wonderful metaphor..
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 3:57 PM
It really was about the silly squirrels eating my flowers!!!!! Thank you!
Deschler Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 12:05 AM
I've had my troubles with squirrels tearing up my flower bed and invading the bird feeder. It happens to us all every summer!... I admire your creativity, your humor and ability to tell such entertaining stories. Well done, Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Kelly, squirrels truly are terrorists!!!!!
Laurie Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 8:09 PM
G'day Arthur... really enjoyed your poem seeing I've also suffered from garden terrorists that come in many shapes and forms - Lindsay
Vaso Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 9:20 PM
LOL , yes love nature except when those little critters want at my flowers!!!!!
Dunn Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Love your pics as always my dearest friend, they made me laugh silly, this is a powerful work also, just loved the read tonight it makes the reader stop and think about the times for which we live in, it flows with the contrasting harsh truths of our modern times, take care cheri
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Thanks Cherl, anyone with a garden can feel my pain! hugs!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 4:49 AM
Arthur, the lines are magnetic and the use of the animals as in the picture is nice.. makes me laugh and makes me think more why you chose rats.. =`) I am not sure what you meant by your comment, i tried to use translation but then again not sure but thanks for the drop by. Take care always. ~Olive Eloisa
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:17 PM
This was just about the squirrels who ate all my flowers in the garden!!!!! LOL
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 5:38 PM
great idea calling them bloody squirrels. Love the pictures you put up of them too. (adorable.haha) Way to get an anti-terrorist poem out of a ravaged sunflower plant, Arthur, and thanks for seeing one of my golden oldies. (I have so many children now, I am more overwhelmed than the old woman in the shoe)
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Well truth be told, this was about the darn squirrels who ravaged my garden, not the terrorists!!!! LOL
Smith Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM
love it...I must be a supporter because of all those sunflower seeds I ate during the baseball season.
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:15 PM
LOL
Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 9:40 AM
I love how you tackle issues that others shy away from. The world needs to see that evil exists and must not be ignored or ran away from IMHO. MURDERING INNOCENT PEOPLE TO INSTILL TERROR CAN HAVE NO VALID JUSTIFICATION KNOWN TO MANKIND. a7
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Thank you Robert! much appreciated!
Jones Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:21 PM
you know im just nuts about this, your one of a kind, keep going!
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Thought this would make you laugh!!!! cheers!
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