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The Bath

I finally took a bath this morning After all day yesterday Sunday With the taste of you still on my mouth, The scent of you in all the rooms and on my couch. Ache inside my belly. I dialled; you said "Hello," and I hung up, yet commanding all day Phone to ring or doorbell, perhaps the slow hiss of tires On gravel and watched my mind Replay a scene that must have been destruction. It's quiet in the dark of country town. I took a bath this morning.

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Patrick Cornwall

Date: 8/10/2022 9:07:00 PM

I love the quiet in the dark of a country town. The man walking and a slight nod or a gentle wave as he carries on. You have a nice style and I’ll enjoy some more reading Patrick

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/10/2022 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Patrick, really kind of you. Yes, I've always felt that rural total darkness as a presence almost tangible. Elizabeth

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/29/2022 9:21:00 AM

This is intriguing, yet at the simultaneously semi-hilarious, at least to me. ~ Shower-Boy

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/29/2022 2:51:00 PM

Everything is hilarious and ambiguous here at the height of civilization. Thank you Wolf man.