John Beam Poet Free verse

The Barfly

Reel in son with one-liners                                                                                           Next to you sugar would taste like salt                                                                                        Hey sweetness, you have won by default                                                                                         Crazy catchy come-on caught a keeper                                                   12/16/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:17 AM Brilliant take John n a great win.. big congrats! John Beam December 23, 2015 at 2:27 PM Thanks for kind words, Upma.

Eve Roper December 21, 2015 at 11:23 AM Congratulations, John!, Hugs dear friend and have a very Merry Christmas with blessings of love, happiness, wisdom, and wealth. John Beam December 21, 2015 at 3:51 PM Thanks, Eve. Same to you and yours.

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 10:07 AM An enjoyable entry that has a 'reel in' title:) Congrats on a worthy win, John! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 8:14 AM Congratulations! Cleverly done. John Beam December 21, 2015 at 10:33 AM Thanks, Susan

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:44 PM Cool alliterative phrase. Congrats on the win, John.

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:59 PM john, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ John Beam December 20, 2015 at 6:09 PM Thanks, PD:)

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:54 AM JOHN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) John Beam December 20, 2015 at 6:08 PM Thanks, again Skat, with wuv John