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The Bank

I went to the bank but my account was empty As I looked I said check again this just can't be Where did my money go No one seems to know Just a taste of our worlds economy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 5:15:00 PM

so sad and yet great for your win!!

Amy Green

Date: 6/13/2010 9:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2010 4:04:00 AM

Many congratulations Faleshia on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 6/12/2010 8:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your Worthy poem's place, Faleshia. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2010 8:48:00 AM

Congrats Faleshia on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this really fun read and wonderful write.. enjoy your big win today ..with luv ..Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2010 8:41:00 AM

I have the same puzzled look each time I look at my bank account ballance, Faleshia. Congratulations on your win. There were many super Souper entries! Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/11/2010 12:31:00 PM

WE must have the same bank manager , Faleshia . Good luck in the contest ....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/11/2010 12:14:00 PM

Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Faleshia. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2010 12:04:00 PM

how true,, where does it all go... with taxes and what not.... funny one Feleshia, enjoyed....smiles:)

Larry Belt

Date: 6/11/2010 11:08:00 AM

LOL.....Great one Faleshia...Larry