The Bank

I went to the bank but my account was empty
As I looked I said check again this just can't be
  Where did my money go
  No one seems to know
Just a taste of our worlds economy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:15 PM
so sad and yet great for your win!!
Green Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on your win!
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Many congratulations Faleshia on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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June 12, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Congratulations on your Worthy poem's place, Faleshia. Agape, Moses
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June 12, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Congrats Faleshia on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this really fun read and wonderful write.. enjoy your big win today ..with luv ..Linda-Marie
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June 12, 2010 at 8:41 AM
I have the same puzzled look each time I look at my bank account ballance, Faleshia. Congratulations on your win. There were many super Souper entries! Love, Carolyn
Kelly Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 12:31 PM
WE must have the same bank manager , Faleshia . Good luck in the contest ....
Brown Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Faleshia. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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June 11, 2010 at 12:04 PM
how true,, where does it all go... with taxes and what not.... funny one Feleshia, enjoyed....smiles:)
Belt Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 11:08 AM
LOL.....Great one Faleshia...Larry
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