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The Banana Zeal

There once was a banana with zeal Who loved to show off with great appeal With a peel on the ground It slipped, oh how it found A rib breaking, a painful ordeal

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write. Poor Banana... Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:24:00 AM

Ouch! Congratulations Las! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 4:36:00 PM

Lasaad, fun and entertaining, congratulations on your winning placement!

Valsa George

Date: 8/20/2023 6:37:00 PM

It has happened to me. Once I slipped on a banana peel and fell flat. Fortunately it was in my younger days when bones were not brittle.... ! Great limerick dear friend !

Ink Empress

Date: 8/20/2023 7:08:00 AM

Ouch, haha this is an excellent limerick. And the cadence is brilliant, and so profound, i was singing these words as i read this limerick. A banana with zeal, who loved to show off with great appeal. Those rhymes are so creative and excellent for this limerick. Loved reading this hearty one

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2023 3:22:00 AM

Good one(but poor banana). You have very nice rhythm, rhyme and flow in this one. They are not so easy to write but you have done a nice job. Thanks for sharing this humor and for dropping by my page. Sara

Michael Tor

Date: 8/19/2023 8:25:00 PM

Lasaad love your theme my friend it was nice to see you write some comedy. Very clever and enjoyed reading my friend...

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/19/2023 8:20:00 PM

Haha, this one's sooo good! 'A banana with zeal' definitely found a humorous tale in your write.. Such wonderful rhythm and captivating wordplay in this piece.. ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/19/2023 3:47:00 PM

Hello Sotto, I feel sorry for the banana. Sotto enjoy your evening my friend. //Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/19/2023 3:00:00 PM

Ouch! Good one Sotto :) lol

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/19/2023 2:11:00 PM

Hahahah the banana got its just desserts!! Love it A marvelous contender for the Limerick contest . BOL