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The Ballad of Prospector Pete

Prospector Pete had roamed the hills fer years searchin' fer some gold. He and his faithful burro, Fred, were both growin' weary and old. He'd looked fer color in many a mountain and stream in Colorado, Lookin' fer that mother lode, that elusive vein, his own El Dorado. Oh, he'd found a few nuggets here and there, but didn't 'mount to much. Those he did find he'd blown on gamblin', women, whiskey and such. Pete would save a bag of dust or two from his many wanton toots, To grubstake himself to re-supply his jeans, shovels and boots. He staked claims 'long ripplin' streams and left many holes 'long the way. The mountains and valleys are pocked with his diggin's to this very day! He'd come up dry, nothin' there and move on to more appealin' pickin's, Burrowin' and pannin' with elbows flyin' workin' like the dickens! Pete would winter in his cabin 'til spring then he'd begin his annual quest, Packin' his tools on long-sufferin' Fred and head fer the hills to the west. If he didn't find that elusive bonanza this year he swore that he'd retire, To his cabin at the foot of Mount Pisgah and enjoy the blazin' fire. Time passed and Pete wasn't seen 'round town much anymore. On a wintry day his pals found him froze to death upon his cabin floor! They dug Pete's grave and buried him just outside his cabin door. Eureka! Six feet down was that vein of gold that he'd been a-lookin' for!

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Date: 12/12/2018 3:09:00 PM
You are a fabulous story teller Bob and I love your humour, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/12/2018 5:07:00 AM
Bob, I thoroughly enjoyed this outstanding ballad. Especially admire the way you made Pete such an entertaining character whose quest for gold ends with a twist. Congratulations on taking second place! There was a lot of great competition in this contest, and your entry was one of the best. Hugs, Carolyn
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/12/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank Carolyn - glad you enjoyed and many thx for considering my entry worthy of a win. Your contest really went fast - I had no more submitted my poem until the winners were announced - I like that!! Bob
Date: 6/27/2018 1:52:00 AM
G'day Robert … I shoulda seen that coming but I didn't. I was too engrossed with Pete and his searching - still giggling - Lindsay
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Date: 4/11/2018 5:39:00 PM
Great to see your humorous poem on the "Best New Poems" list, Bob. Enjoyed the ballad of poor old Pete. Sometimes we just don't get what we're looking for, or if we do, it's too late to enjoy it! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:35:00 AM
Love the originality, flow and narrative of this ballad my friend. The ending was truly brilliant and Pete finally found his gold but it was too late. As oft found, ""too late"" is a terrible place to be. A fav and a damn fine read....
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Date: 3/13/2018 6:26:00 PM
You ticked all my boxes! Western, great rhyming, story telling, and most of all humor!
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Date: 3/13/2018 6:21:00 PM
Now this is sad but guess Pete found other pleasures when he died. Bet old Fred is glad. Enjoyed it Robert. Thanks.
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