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The Ball

The sun lights up the air at dawn, and crystal lutes play the tune. We wonder whatever went wrong as we choke on funeral fumes. They leave it in the air tonight, packed in slowly a tempest fright. The fever spills upon the sand as armies march across the land. We play in time, the world cries, out amongst the things that die. The cinders come and draw us nigh as we figure upon the lie. To restrain the number called while ladies dance inside the hall. They look so lovely at the ball just before the maddening fall.

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Date: 7/23/2025 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle!
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/25/2025 10:21:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2025 7:29:00 AM
Well, I must be on a roll ??! First I read a mournful write about a wolf man dying on a mountain side. This one feels more credible, like the loss and horrors of war. Well done Brian. Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki
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