The Back Yard Splinter

We were raised in a large city
Accessed by, car, taxi, or bus
Sidewalks went to who knows where
But the back yard was country to us

Fenced in but hardly containing
Three very large trees we could climb
Half grass, half dirt, where we could run
Our playground for most of the time!

We had fun, my brother and I
And neighbor kids too, there would be
One thing, that we would discover
Was a post leaned against a tree

Where'd it come from, why was it there?
Could we move it if we so deemed?
Did the tree hold it or it the tree?
Could it be heavy as it seemed?

We had fun climbing that old post
Then we'd slide back down on our feet
But it came to a crashing halt
When I tried to slide on my seat!

Attacked by a hook shaped splinter, 
My spanking region, it abused
We had to wake up my mother,
She worked nights and was not amused!

Face down on the doctors table
His scalpel, the Doc would apply
And every time he made a cut
Brought a tear to my brothers eye!

Just a memory from the past
A lesson to think first was had
At least though, since that incident,
A spanking did not seem as bad!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/1/2019 10:57:00 AM
Hi Pat: I came here from Laurie’s page. Nice to find another good yarn teller. Thanks for the fun story from childhood. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 10/1/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thanks SuZ...(Liberated Susie, I'm assuming. I love it, spelling checker hates it) Cheers back to you as well!....pat
Date: 9/29/2019 8:50:00 PM
G'day PAT … a great tale indeed. Kids love adventure but sometimes the results end up bad in the end, but really that is not the end of it at all is it - thanks PAT - Lindsay
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Date: 9/30/2019 3:06:00 PM
Well, this one came out in the "end" I guess.......80)
Date: 9/24/2019 9:09:00 PM
Yikes! A sore lesson to learn ~ Love the vivid image you painted here (for the most part ;) ~ a story very well told and so much fun to read!
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Date: 9/25/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thanks HT, I appreciate that. I'm not a fan of real long poems, so was aghast at the length of this one, but couldn't think of a good way to shorten it. Thanks again!...Pat
Date: 9/24/2019 4:44:00 PM
well told, pat! i can picture the entire scene and i love the humor you inject in so much of your poetry...
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Date: 9/24/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thanks you Ilene. That is great coming from one of my favorite poets!!....Thank you very much!!......pat
Date: 9/24/2019 2:22:00 PM
I love your rhyming Quatrain and can remember playing out in the yard and coming in to mom with splinters, bee stings, dirty faces and hungry mouths. Haha. Well done.
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Date: 9/24/2019 6:06:00 PM
Absolutely! Thanks for commenting!.......80)
Date: 9/24/2019 1:29:00 PM
Damn.... splinters are awful.. funny the things we remember..
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Date: 9/24/2019 6:05:00 PM
Some things are hard to forget, years ago but I'll forget stuff I just did yesterday!....Go figure!......pat
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