Sotto Poet Poet Rubaiyat

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The Awareness

Stars are crammed into the cosmos. 
Sought and chosen as my name rose.
Each evil and skinned modesty,
In need times, I was prone to praise.

Since my house is calm and lonely. 
Angels poised the wide Gate Glory. 
Sometimes horrible things happen.
My name is stated, I'm in glee. 

This mundane world isn't my heaven.
In high skies, near to grace fountain.
A deep sorrow soon brings to light. 
The eyelids shine as tears flow down.
 
A soul that could be tamed by might.
And greet All with hugs and delight.
Sorrow moves in the strained shadow.
I need peace to soothe my insight.

I'm curled on a scented pillow. 
I'm anxious, when or not; I'll go. 
Sad loss to a cherished farewell. 
I gave up and sighed with sorrow.

Perhaps in the darkness of hell. 
Slight echo may be felt indwell. 
The same sleep took me anyplace.
I am free of dread and befell.


Written: October 07, 2021

Interlocking Rubaiyat Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Angel L Villanueva

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Harry Horsman October 9, 2021 at 12:24 AM There is so much evil out there, Lasaad, yet when i read poetry as goos as this, it gives me so much hope. Thank you

Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2021 at 9:21 AM An awesome write Lasaad, for certain in God’s last reckoning you’ll be granted His holy blessings… Belle

Paulette Calasibetta October 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM Lasaad, So deep and meaningful, filled with the grace that only comes from God. Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 5:49 AM Enchanting write, Lasaad. Your insights dig deep into quest for enlightenment. A superb poem. Sotto Poet October 8, 2021 at 8:45 AM I’m glad you like it Vijay, and thanks for your kindness dear friend.

Victor Buhagiar October 8, 2021 at 1:08 AM Grand poem Lasaad. I would find it difficult to compose seeing I'm not much at rhyme. Sotto Poet October 8, 2021 at 8:42 AM Thank you so much, Victor, your kind words mean a lot to me

L Milton Hankins October 7, 2021 at 6:52 PM Some marvelous lines here, Lasaad. Best wishes for the contest. Sotto Poet October 8, 2021 at 8:41 AM Thank you so much Milton, for your delightful comment. This poem is not written for any contest.

William Kelii Kekaula October 7, 2021 at 6:01 PM Lasaad, a blessed write of good measure my friend. Wondrous depictions left in their resilient wakening in the furtherance of my reading, nicely done. Peace and joy to you, Aloha! Sotto Poet October 8, 2021 at 8:40 AM Thank you so much William, appreciate your superb comment and kind words my friend.