The Avenue

A cold wind shreds
into moans
through the gritted branches
of apple trees then quietens 
to a yawn rippled
across the waters of a lake.
Further up the valley,
half the trees have been uprooted
and mounded into bonfires
that smoulder through
a moonless night.

Nearby, long lines of traffic 
pass on a highway where
lives, cocooned in comfort, 
barrel by through drifts of smoke.
One hundred years ago
and a hemisphere away,
young men from here
stood propped in trenches
in fear of a more
lethal smoke.

Folded over
a bypassed road, an avenue
of trees commemorate the dead.
Each bears a weathered plaque.
A century on, the names
have been hollowed out
and no longer live in a memory
housed in the mind of a parent,
wife or child. Come April,
in the pre dawn mist,
they are lifted high above 
their earthly station to become
the saints of a secular nation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/5/2022 5:49:00 PM
Very nice, Paul. Great imagery and and easy flow
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/5/2022 9:16:00 PM
Thanks Jeff.
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