The Autumn Train

She turns to fire engine red as her leaves begin to change 
toot toot! she goes as she travels through the autumn train 
Her caboose shakes in the wind but she hangs on tight  
while the leaves dance, shimmer & jiggle in the dancing breeze. 
Aware that she needs to let go of her most prized possessions, 
She enjoys one last cling of the season,  before winter's festoon.  
Bright flamingo ruby leaves have set her frame aglow, 
but now, it's time to let go.  
She recalls a time when she was exploding with leaves, 
a time when she was fed on sunshine and energy
a time when climbing on the Autumn train, was one great big adventure. 
Today she travels at a sure and steady pace,  
pulling out all her horns, whistles and bells, she chugs along, 
as the rails of her caboose fly faster and faster, 
The leaves fall softly to the ground, one at a time, 
without making a fuss, without making a sound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Cantu Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:23 PM
This is fun and nostalgic at the same time, Rose. I enjoyed it very much!
Brotherton Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:55 PM
We are starting a heat spell that will be devoid of any precipitation for the next two weeks. I only hope my red maples can hold on to their leaves long enough to enjoy Autumn's train.
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Thoughtful but I figured it out. It's everything.
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 2:33 AM
- Autumn's journey can be beautiful and peaceful ... we had our first autumn stom in the first week of August ... (and the summer has been really wet) - A lovely poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 10:18 AM
With this summer heat, I long for Autumn. Hope all are well. Hugs.
Rolland Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 4:10 PM
wonderful, and touching, Rose, quiet nostalgia from travels, enjoyed a lot your poem have a sweet day
Goff Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Peaceful, spiritual, nice! Vie!
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 12:08 PM
A beautiful journey through autumn, Vienna.
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