The Autumn Mist

Mellow autumn….how refreshing!
Draw nigh that my soul may find delight 
In the vibrant hues of red and gold
The long walks in cool brisk air 
Watching the wild geese fly south  
In quiet solitude, latent dreams resurrect 
They haunt my fragrant reverie
As I walk a familiar path, down these steps of stone,
That lead me to “my place” by the sea!
Where the cries of hungry seagulls resound
As they squabble over a miniscule meal, 
Wild surf crash into boulders-twin, standing in its midst 
Nonchalantly, I toss my loafers aside, 
“Where are you today, Sir Knight?”, I inquire aloud
“I can not find you in this mist!”  
“One moment you are here inside my thoughts
The instant  I turn, then you are gone!”  
Like ocean spray, refreshing, you then vanish!
So, here I stroll upon this desolate shore, alone

The fireplace lit, soft, pink candles abound
What ambiance these feelings inspire
"Where are you this dreamy day?"
Hear how fiercely the ocean roars!  
Wild and relentless, bashing boulders in its path!
Winds softly whispering, brush my cheek, and instinctively, I smile
”Was that a kiss from you?  I whisper.  But there comes no reply. 
Only the silence in the whispering wind
“Gentle, autumn winds, do you know of my fate? 
“Have you no secrets to share with me?”
“Do tell, is it you in the mist and wind?”
“Or are you  just a wandering phantom 
Lost, upon this beautiful, shore?”
“Or, perhaps a magician from afar, casting random spells?”
“What grateful audience you have found in these,
The mighty sea and its countless creatures!  
Listen!  Hear their thunderous applause for you!”
“Is it you I see, in my autumn dream?
“Is it you within the mist?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/13/2010 1:07:00 PM
I hope the Autumn mists lift and there standing is the man who was in the Blue Suit like your dress in the other poem I read earlier, nice one Audrey >> James
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Date: 8/30/2010 12:06:00 PM
Audrey, your poem has the unique quality of letting us look through a window into your soul. You have extolled all of the emotions the fall has to offer. This so beautifully written with a haunted longing. One day your dream will manifest if you keep visualizing. We are sure to see it in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/29/2010 10:33:00 PM
Your "Knight" is out there, Audrey. The mist will dissipate and he will emerge, as if from an "autumn dream." Beautifully written imagery and quite an eerie dream-like quality throughout the poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 9:15:00 PM
Interesting take on the fall, Audrey. Very descriptive!! hope you are having a nice weekend. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:45:00 PM
Wow Audrey, love this captivating write.. Enjoy your weeked, love Wilma
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Date: 8/28/2010 6:59:00 PM
I thought as if I was reading a romantic poet. Really very creative write. Good luck
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:20:00 PM
A wonderful splendid tribute to the Fall season and good luck in Amelia's contest.. lovely words from my BBF today .. and always appreciate your special comments to me.. your BBF..
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:12:00 PM
Interesting ..Very descriptive write about that wonderful time of the year when the air cools down and outside is much more comfortable..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:08:00 PM
lovely, wonderful poem
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