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The Atheist-Whispers Are Falling

Whispers Are Falling Of the mountains that I’ve not seen Vapid voices are calling Standing still in the Valleys green Where whispers are falling Of my heart that has not been touched Love in its circuitous crawling My idle hands that have not clutched Where whispers are falling Of the eyes that will never see Forging lachrymal tears appalling Amidst landscapes of mortality Where whispers are falling Of the gods, we never hear The soul of man stalling Pensive prayers that disappear Where whispers are falling Of dichotomized dreams that vanish The minds of malign mauling In the hypocrisy of a baneful banish Where whispers are falling. ...an atheist point of view... ...or fake news!... Nov.25.2018 The Atheist Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen N/A for contest

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Date: 11/27/2018 1:32:00 PM
This is a masterpiece, flowing and lyrical, beautiful rhymes, I love it!
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Date: 11/25/2018 10:34:00 PM
Sadly, these thoughts hold so much truth. I am not sure what to say. All I know is this: Those that wish to know, will listen, if not- the heart stays closed. Beautifully written and presented my friend. Love and Understanding. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:59:00 PM
Wow! Powerful, expressive and beautifully artistic poetry, my creative bro bro. ‘Pensive prayers that disappear where whispers are falling’ - your imagery captures my imagination! Best wishes for a win.. love and hugs, your lit sissy, Illuminatra.. lol
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Date: 11/25/2018 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on this superb write! Love all the alliteration and unique words. Very well done
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Date: 11/25/2018 3:27:00 PM
I read this and thought "this is not for me", but it was CERTAINLY for you, my dear poet friend. Beautiful!
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Date: 11/25/2018 3:22:00 PM
Interesting write for the contest..
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Date: 11/25/2018 2:39:00 PM
Well written WW! Great description and rhyming. Love & Light :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 2:39:00 PM
A receptive beautiful soul masterfully captured the dimensions of "an atheist point of view"! A great work Winged Warrior! Stay in the Light of Faith and Beauty! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
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