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The Astronomical Mighty Maybe

By the time you see me,
I'll be a long since past;
By the time you read me,
Your fortune will be cast.
While I brighten your night
With my twinkling light,
Know that your very existence...
Is but a miracle of might.



7.2.2020

You Are A Star Poetry Contest
N/A Judged 7/8/2020

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2020

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Aditi Mishra Date: 8/1/2020 10:26:00 PM Oh I love this! In such few words you've displayed the mighty miracle a star is. I wish I knew how to do that. Congratulations on your win. Much love :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/2/2020 5:38:00 AM Thank you Lovely! I can’t help myself, my mind is a sieve ;), xomo

V. Deepa Date: 7/31/2020 12:59:00 AM Back once again to congratulate you on your win Mo mam....feels great to re- read your wonderful poems.:-)Keep inspiring and keep glowing:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love:-* Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/31/2020 5:10:00 AM Thank you a Lovely! I hope you are having a wonderful day, xomo

Constance La France Date: 7/29/2020 7:11:00 PM Pigeon, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/31/2020 5:10:00 AM Thank you Constance. Have a lovely day :), xomo

Quoth Theraven Date: 7/28/2020 7:54:00 AM Pigeon Tart Pie, Poetic might in fortune's write, or distant exploding ball of gas? Both can exist in this universe. -Richard Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/28/2020 8:04:00 AM All a matter of perspective. ;), Thank you a Richard! xomo

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 7/16/2020 11:03:00 AM Wonderful poem! I am a great fan of poems that say so much without an over use of adjectives or complicated vocabulary!! This is my kind of poem! ***** 5 stars. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/16/2020 11:51:00 AM Thank you Krish! I am of similar taste. It is rare that a verbose poem can hold my attention. It really has to grab, word by word. xomo

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/13/2020 3:09:00 AM Truly wonderful my poem; a personificaton. Now I wish I would have used another type for this contest. Sob. Sob. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/14/2020 11:44:00 AM Giggles! I love how this turned out. Too wee to compete, I read all the winners, they are FABULOUS. xomo!

Frances Schiavina Date: 7/10/2020 9:49:00 AM A beautiful poem! Short and to the point. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/14/2020 11:42:00 AM Thank you Frances! :))) xomo!

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/9/2020 10:56:00 AM Awesome, Pigeon! Panagiota Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/9/2020 12:58:00 PM Thank you Panagiota! Hugs! ~mo

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/8/2020 8:14:00 PM Such a lovely, moving poem! Janice Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/9/2020 7:32:00 AM Thank you Janice! mo hugs :)))

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/6/2020 3:52:00 PM Your little poems are a miracle of might, Mo, and they always shine a light on my day (or night!) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/6/2020 6:13:00 PM Thank you Lovely! :))) xomo

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/5/2020 7:06:00 PM Excellent! Superb! Astronomically Good! Surefire winner here. Bravo! :) gw Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/6/2020 6:26:00 AM Thank you Wolf Man! I hope she likes it :))) xomo!

John Watt Date: 7/5/2020 2:31:00 PM Ooh, I like this a LOT, Pidge! I often wonder when I look at the stars how much time has passed in that huge distance it took for the light to reach my eyes. Awesome title, too. Hope to see this placed high, my starry friend! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/5/2020 3:49:00 PM Thank you John! We share wonder. I love "Pidge" btw ;), xomo!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/4/2020 8:15:00 PM short but STAR SPacular!! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/5/2020 6:46:00 AM Thank you Andrea! (btw, when I say "twinkling" it has 3 syllables ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison Date: 7/4/2020 2:41:00 PM WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/5/2020 6:45:00 AM Winky face blowing you a kiss ~x

Eric Cohen Date: 7/4/2020 10:06:00 AM A touching stellar gem. Truly enjoyed. Best to you, Pigeon. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/5/2020 6:45:00 AM Thank you Eric! xomo

V. Deepa Date: 7/3/2020 2:25:00 PM Yes,you brighten our nights with your twinkling light;-) With just few words you broadcast high thoughts Mo mam:-)Good luck for the contest. Have a great day.Much love:-) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 8:32:00 PM Thank you lovely Deepa, warm hugs ~mo

Rico Leffanta Date: 7/3/2020 1:54:00 PM Love the title, too! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 1:56:00 PM Thank you Rico! RSD as always my friend, xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/3/2020 1:01:00 PM -"Pigeon Tart" ... I've been wondering who it was ... :))) ... when I'm away for a while so many new names pop up, dear Maureen :) - I see your star clearly ... one of the brightest, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 1:55:00 PM Yay! Lovely to know your Sunshine Smile is still lighting up this place. Thank you Anne-Lise! Mo hugs ~x

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/3/2020 9:05:00 AM Yes! I enjoyed this! Love the title too. Hugs...Kim Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 11:07:00 AM Thank you Kim! Hugs galore xomo

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/3/2020 5:23:00 AM You are a star, my poetic genius friend; no stretch there. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 11:06:00 AM You are awfully kind! Thank you :))) xomo <3

David Kavanagh Date: 7/3/2020 4:35:00 AM Hard to imagine when you see a star or galaxy that humanity probably wasn’t around when the light you see left it’s origin, and the star could already be gone, great musing from the best, go super Mo, Cheers David Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 11:05:00 AM It fills my mind and blows it at the same time all of the time ;), Thank you! xomo

Timothy Mcguire Date: 7/2/2020 9:25:00 PM Nice! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/3/2020 11:03:00 AM Thank you Timothy! :), xomo