The Ascension

the glorious light touches my poetic soul am I a witness written for Raul's contest

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/20/2009 3:11:00 AM

very well done! Joyce! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2009 5:18:00 PM

Great write, Joyce, and much luck in Raul's contest.. I also have entered.. luv the flow of these words u chose to use.. enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2009 12:28:00 PM

Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration.Wishing you the best in the contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 11/17/2009 9:23:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2009 1:26:00 PM

Yes you are a witness. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/17/2009 12:38:00 PM

Beautifully written, a spirtual poem for Raul's contest! Best wishes, Joyce! Love, Carrie