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Transform me... weave me slowly into the silky essence of ecstasy ~ spellbinding are your stirring threads of silver and gold - rich is your tapestry of tender tendrils -- and sacred is the union of our tantra breaths Susan Ashley July 6, 1028 ------------------------------ *Tantra; Sanskrit: literally “loom, weave, system” - Wikipedia. Tantra represents weaving strands into a unified whole; leaving this piece open to different interpretations of awareness, romance or spirituality based on your perspective* ______________________________ ~ First Place ~ Submitted for: July 2018 Premiere Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/30/2018 8:36:00 AM
Hi Susan, such a romantic canvas you do paint with your beautiful words. Much belated congratulations on your win in the contest. Much deserved with this romantic jewel. Your words flow. You know me Susan, I have to look at the write in a romantic context. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/30/2018 3:02:00 PM
Your warm spirit does fill my page with inspiration and delight, Mike. The kindness of your comments never ceases to amaze me and the light of your friendship never fails to bring me a smile. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this poem which is very special to me. Thank you for your kind congrats and for your beautiful comments, which I agree, shine in the context of your romantic heart, as they should, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/26/2018 11:01:00 AM
I am still catching up, Susan, and I finally, read your beautifully-woven poem today that presents such a romantic tapestry of love. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/26/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, for your lovely appreciation for my poem. Your beautiful comments are uplifting and inspiring. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem my wonderful friend. It's so nice to see you and your heartwarming visit and kind congrats are held in my deepest gratitude. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 7/17/2018 9:41:00 AM
Sincerest congratulations on you my dear friend winning a fine trophy with this superb piece! A fav and a jewel of glistening depths and heartfelt soul.
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:18:00 PM
Dear Robert, your lovely appreciation fills me with joy. Your heartfelt comments, warm congrats and fav are held with my deepest gratitude. Thank you for the golden luster your kindness has bestowed upon my poem. Warmest wishes always my great friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/16/2018 4:12:00 PM
A big congrats on your trophy! The judge has excellent taste in poetry.
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:10:00 PM
Ah Richard, you are most charming and your comments are most appreciated. Thank you for your kind congrats and for the smile in my heart. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend. ~Susan
Date: 7/15/2018 5:42:00 AM
Splendid piece Susan, congratulations on a fine trophy win Lovely! xomo
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, my lovely, for your uplifting and beautiful comments and kindhearted congrats. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Romantic, beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/14/2018 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Susan.. your heartwarming congrats and lovely comments are cherished. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 2:16:00 PM
Passionate verse, a tapestry of inked feelings. Well done. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Greg, for the delight of your heartwarming comments and for the kindness of your congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 7:37:00 AM
Susan, congratulations on your top win with this beautifully woven poem, well done.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:39:00 PM
Broken Wings, your lovely comments and kindhearted congrats are held in my truest appreciation. Thank you for your kindness.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 7:32:00 AM
Fabulous sensual imagery Susan, the feeling of expectation this poem creates is sublime! Congratulations on your very well-deserved win :-)
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:38:00 PM
Nina, it's so wonderful to hear from you.. Thank you for your beautiful comments and kindhearted congrats. Your lovely sentiments are deeply appreciated. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 7:30:00 AM
Back with Congrats!!
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Kim for the kindness of your return visit and for your heartwarming congrats.. Warmest wishes always my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 5:02:00 AM
I knew it,Susan a big Congratulations on your trophy win. Way to go girl, I'm so proud of you. Hugs and xxx's...Maria :)
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:36:00 PM
Dear Maria, thank you for return visit, your inspiring presence warms my heart always. Your beautiful comments and kind congrats are held in my truest appreciation, my lovely and talented friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 7/13/2018 3:41:00 AM
Stunning imagery! Congrats on your trophy win, Susan. I love your poem.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:05:00 PM
Agnes, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Your lovely comments and kind congrats warms my heart. Thank you for your kindness.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/10/2018 2:38:00 PM
Oh how beautifully woven Susan!
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Date: 7/10/2018 3:09:00 PM
It's such a pleasure to hear from you FJ. Thank you for your wonderful visit and your lovely comments. Your warm thoughts are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 2:31:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem enveloped in romantic, sensuous and passionate content, Susan. Love the title which highlights the trend that runs throughout each line. 'Transform me' is a supplication that just cannot be ignored! ~ warm regards & hugs, my friend. // paul
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Date: 7/11/2018 9:40:00 AM
Dear Paul, your beautiful appreciation for my poem, and its title, fills me with joy and gratitude for receiving your precious comments . Your shining presence here adds a lustrous glow to my poem that is wholeheartedly embraced. Thank you for your cherished friendship.. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 7:43:00 AM
Ahh, this is such a beautiful and a gorgeous poem,
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Date: 7/10/2018 11:00:00 PM
Your precious thoughts are held in my truest appreciation, Faraz. Thank you for your lovely comments. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 6:04:00 AM
This beautiful poem of yours floats one into a transcendental spiritual realm.A true gem and a fave for me Susan my dear friend....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/11/2018 9:34:00 AM
Your wonderful visits always gladden my heart and brighten my day, dear Maria. You have unveiled the nature and intent of this poem with your beautifully elegant comments. Thank you for your cherished insight, for sharing your precious thoughts with me and for the fave. Warmest wishes always my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/9/2018 4:46:00 AM
An exquisite write, Susan. The beautifully woven words flow passionately creating a mood of deep emotion and romance. T.J
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:56:00 PM
Teppo, I so appreciate your lovely visit and I relish your heartwarming comments. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem and your wonderful thoughts are treasured.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 9:36:00 PM
Like a deep refreshing breath followed by a sated sigh Just beautiful, Susan! Love it! :)
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Date: 7/10/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Taai! Your beautiful comments are truly treasured. Warmest wishes always my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 9:01:00 PM
Oh Susan, this is breathtakingly beautiful and romantic. I am in awe! A fave for me my friend. xxoo
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Date: 7/10/2018 3:14:00 PM
Connie, your beautiful comments and the fave are held in my truest appreciation. It's always such a pleasure when I hear from you and I delight in your visit. Thank you my lovely friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 7:05:00 PM
This is sweet neat fitting lovingly into one...I like the feel...cozy...All the best Susan...good vibes
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Date: 7/10/2018 3:12:00 PM
Dear Arturo, your presence here is always such a delight. Thank you for the kindness of your uplifting comments and for the good vibes mon ami.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/8/2018 10:39:00 AM
to read then ponder of such a moment's pause brings a fragrant memory of lovers caressed by their own desire to leave this world if only briefly where thoughts disperse and emotions are in tune with a symphony of sighs in various cords found pleasing to the ear...my first thought after reading dear poet
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Date: 7/8/2018 1:33:00 PM
I am enraptured by the beauty of your poetic response to my poem, Frederic. I relish your exquisite thoughts that take my breath away and are held in the jewel box of my truest appreciation. Thank you for the golden luster your kindness has bestowed upon my poem. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/7/2018 11:06:00 AM
Fantastic write my dear sane side if a fabulous duo! Lol! Again I must go fav it now! Well in a second Lol! Just want to make sure you understand you insane twinster really thinks we need to add another add on to the totem as our walks are becoming quite full!;) Love you insane sister!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/17/2018 2:13:00 PM
To no avail.. Lol! :))
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/10/2018 10:28:00 PM
See no wonder mom and dad tried to keep you away from my nuttiness! Lol!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 2:43:00 PM
Ah, my insane dear twinster sis! I agree with your marvelous comments about adding some new walls to the totem on which to hang our poems!! :)) Pretty soon the totem will be like a poetic maze.. and we'll be lost amongst our words.. lol! I think I'm getting a touch more nuttier these days and I like it! haha! Thank you for your beautiful comments my lovely sis! Love ya crazy girl! Your sane, but lost in a maze of my own making, twin..lol! :))
Date: 7/7/2018 9:14:00 AM
A gorgeous write. A treat to luxuriate in your words.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 1:25:00 PM
Richard, your lovely appreciation for my poem fills me with joy. I relish your delightful visit as well as your uplifting kindness. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Date: 7/7/2018 8:21:00 AM
Sensuous and beautiful! Warm wishes to you also, dear friend!
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Date: 7/8/2018 1:19:00 PM
Kim, thank you for sharing your beautiful appreciation for my poem with me. I relish your wonderful thoughts my friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 7/7/2018 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Susan, a romantic soul you have, and I am glad to call you friend.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/8/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Caren, for your lovely appreciation of my poem and for your wonderful visit. I'm glad to call you friend as well.. warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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