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Poetic Form: Alexandrine
Inspired: 2024 January 07

 

*2nd Place*
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Contest Judged: 2024 February 10
Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley

 

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The Art was Most Masterful on the Dark Canvas

"Monet's paintings are best seen from afar than close up," ... by Poet. Faraway the figment, like Monet the pigment, the brother so gallant, how he flaunts his talent, he paints at a farness, like a horse to harness. On art, less than tasteful, funds spent a bit wasteful, hence, see he a crackpot, three prunes be his jackpot. The other, quill--fountain--built a tidy mountain, first bees in a bonnet when he wrote a sonnet, then that which was timeless 'twas wrote poems rhymeless. Mom gave, 'twas none cheaply, had pockets dug deeply, both brothers did cherish, their sinful ways perish. Mom was not devious, planned she thought previous. saw her boys sinister, she aimed to minister, The Word generated, the cloth, venerated. Conformed beautifully, her sons dutifully, tale of our brotherhood, as she vowed motherhood.
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 12:51 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again... Have a wonderful blessed day...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Again, I thank you, Paula. You're a dear soul, Aloha, William
Hawley Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 9:36 AM
Thanks, Miranda, Aloha, William
One Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Nice use of form and full of imagery.. nicely done..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Your welcomed posting makes my day, Silent One. Aloha, William
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 10:07 AM
You have skillfully crafted an exceptionally distinctive and exquisite poem, which exudes profound depth. I greatly appreciate the meticulous selection of your words, and the inclusion of light-hearted humor adds a layer of charm.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 10:24 AM
'Twas a bit of a grin, Lasaad. I am grateful for your note of it, my friend. Aloha, William
Goldsmith Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 8:38 AM
A wonderful write. I also enjoy Monet's paintings...  Have a blessed day writing away...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, Paula, and have a blessed day too, aloha, William
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:49 AM
You mastered this form beautifully. I love your word choices! There was also light humor. Hilo Poet thank you for sharing!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 4:37 AM
A generosity extends and appreciative hereby notice I, thank thee, Karen. Aloha, William
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