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The Art of Making Love

Tonight we play our favorite duet to an audience of celestial stars. Variations over years; a song we never forget, stroking familiar notes within each bar. Andante: pianissimo: slow caresses as whispers, giving attention to those sensitive keys. Each to the other, a part we deliver; Entwined we perform with such ease. Allegro: increasing our synchronized tempo as our chorus delightfully sings through. Vibrating heartstrings deeply now flow; enjoying our art as if new. Vivo! As the beat of two hearts now race. Crescendo! Intensively, climax is reached. Pausing in arc at this euphoric place; echos in afterglow; encores in dreams.

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Date: 8/1/2014 8:32:00 AM
A beautiful writing Arlene! A unique way of hiding sensuality inside music. Congrats to your well, deserved win! ^_^
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Date: 8/1/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Teddy!.. Hugs, my friend.. Arlene
Date: 7/29/2014 11:57:00 AM
I wonder who was leading the orchestra! But whoever directed proceedings sure possesses a passionate love for music:) Congrats on your fine win, Arlene! // paul
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, Paul, my dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/29/2014 1:38:00 AM
Wonderful write Arlene ! Real art portrayed so well my dear friend,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet Upma!.. Hugs, my dear friend.. Arlene
Date: 7/28/2014 9:08:00 PM
A blast of music! A song of joy! A sweet dreamy night of a girl and boy! Great sensual write my friend. Huge congrats on this write!!! Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:03:00 AM
Ha! Thank you so much for your poetic comments, dear Robert!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/28/2014 7:59:00 PM
Arlene, Congratulations!!! Have fun enjoying the win. I'm grateful, everything went well when judging this contest. Take care, and enjoy my latest blog "Maybe I'm Invisible" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:28:00 PM
Here you are again on the podium...congrats Arlene...hugs Tim
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/28/2014 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Tim! And there you are as usual, besting me! Lol ..one of these days, hun.... One of these days! :-) ... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/10/2014 4:29:00 PM
A sensual Gem from Arlene's pen. Easily the best poem I've read this past few weeks, by a long shot. Way to go girl, James :) :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/10/2014 5:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, James!.. Very generous comments.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/4/2014 9:03:00 PM
Man, We Need More Passion; Something To Breathe Life Into It's Words....KLove *
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/7/2014 2:07:00 PM
I Agree, Jeremy, my friend! Thanks.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/1/2014 5:35:00 PM
An improvised, natural, yet orchestrated opus of ardor Arlene. This poem exemplifies the harmony of gratitude and fulfillment of love heat. " Pausing at arc in this euphoric place..." WOW! Vivaldi sweats on the violin for you. The music of bodies and souls in union. Superb! J.A.B.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 5:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for the generous, encouraging comments, Justin.. I truly appreciate it my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/25/2014 3:53:00 PM
wow, Arlene, this is a great analogy. I love how you interspersed the words related to music . This is an original and well crafted romantic poem.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/25/2014 3:59:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!.. Freddie Vee stole my thunder with his comment.. I can't think about it without laughing now!! Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/25/2014 12:15:00 PM
might as well be a symphony of love's cascading notes... love the whole mood of this piece, arlene... huggs
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/25/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Nette!... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/24/2014 7:27:00 PM
my first reaction was it's a very nice poem my second reaction was I read Freddie's reply and started laughing
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:34:00 PM
I laughed so hard, then on the way home it hit me again and I could hardly see how to drive!.. Lol!. Thank you for stopping by, Frederic, my friend. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/24/2014 6:48:00 PM
Dear Arlene: A very nice musical in the making... Wonder-full! Leon
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/24/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Leon, my friend!.. I must read some of your writings soon.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/24/2014 3:36:00 PM
If music be the food of love play on..... I love this brilliantly crafted write. hugs jan xxxxx
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/24/2014 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Such a generous comment.. Hugs.. Arlene

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