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The Art of Divorce

Gold rings once the same like circles around the sun that sets into dark. The boxes packed some china broke. No more Holidays with your crazy folks. Your new address is off by a number. Where are all your things for your first night slumber. There they sit out on the porch as the rain sprinkles to a soak. All words promised and spoken so strongly.. Off you go as another will not treat me wrongly.. Poet Destroyer (Divorce Club Contest)

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Date: 12/10/2010 12:26:00 AM
This is wonderful, Michael. Congratulations on winning this contest. Your poem is quite heartbreaking.
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Date: 12/8/2010 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win my friend :-) Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 12/3/2010 6:19:00 AM
Wonderful write, Michael. I like the haiku as it really gives us something to think on. Congrats on your deserved 1st place win. Dan C
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Date: 12/3/2010 3:29:00 AM
It is an art indeed, Nicely done Michael. A well deserved First Place ribbon. Joe
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Date: 12/2/2010 11:37:00 PM
congrats with this Michael, so deserved number one. sorry i'm late. the big problem with my time is i'm missing out so much all this wonderful poetry. Harry
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win! It is well deserved!
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Date: 12/2/2010 1:25:00 PM
i guess the last line really did matter. congrads john
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:37:00 PM
My heartfelt congratulations on this first place win, Michael
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:49:00 AM
Awesome! Go change in perspective, I like how they all flow together so nicely the haiku is awesome, congrats on 1st place!
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:46:00 AM
Many congratulations Micheal for this wonderful win.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:19:00 AM
Congrats my White Knight on your first place win in P.D.'s great contest.. u nailed it luv ..way to go ..top spot ..enjoy with luv.. your Jersey Girl forever..
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:02:00 AM
Michael, congratulations on your first place win in Pd's contest hun.. I can see you smiling btw ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:49:00 AM
Good MORNING! Michael, YOU GOT ME WITH ( CIRCLES AROUND THE SUN ) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations Michael for your 1st Place win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 6:08:00 AM
Super awesome as I commented before but just had to read again Michael.. good luck my friend.. a rare beauty ..J.G. knows and feels each word .. been there too..luv.. good luck again.. J.G...luv..
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Date: 11/26/2010 7:44:00 PM
A perfect entry for the contest, Michael..and I thought I was bad..LOL..Good luck always.. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:09:00 PM
Great writing Michael, captivating imagery indeed,thank you for sharing the read. Good Luck in the contest :-) ~ Adell
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Date: 11/26/2010 4:48:00 PM
This sure sounds like a winner to me, Michael-- enjoyed your haiku --wow deep meaning into that one then you bring in some wit and humor too-- very nicely done on all three :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:07:00 AM
Your limerick is a hoot, Michael! Few people like spending holidays with their inlaws. The couplet is strong -- really a perfect divorce trilogy you have created. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:04:00 PM
MIchael, my very favorite in this group is the haiku. That is so profound and how you related it to nature. Nice seeing you tonight. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:11:00 PM
I LVE ALL 3 MICHALE, SMILES, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat
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Date: 11/25/2010 5:37:00 PM
Very humorous with wit abounding in this write, Michael. Good luck.
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:57:00 AM
Thnx Michael for reading my write "Emptiness camouglaging along woth feelings " and leaving encouraging comments.... Happy thanksgiving Day....... Best luck for PD's contest ....... Luv/best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:25:00 AM
Awesome entry Mr. F! You sure are throwing down the gauntlet with this one.. All the best for the contest.. ;-) love Wilma
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