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The Art of Dental Floss

Here's a tangled thready mass of dental floss Glued on some canvas board with gesso Each layer of the spider's snare dyed a different color One layer dried then layered o'er another Oh the marl-morning sour-gut history The saw-toothed plaque-frozen mystery! There's corn beans and sirloin on the string Microscopic V-8 a thermal-digested chicken wing Good bad medium days Hidden 'neath and in filet Here's Jackson Pollock with his dripping Splashing abstract expressionism Pollock though a genius failed In splashing paint pale after pale To realize a more thrifty less messy way To say through teeth what he had to say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/25/2011 1:32:00 PM
Interesting critique of Jackson Pollock..I will have to look up his work...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Your thoughts were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:32:00 AM
this one more difficult for me, but it was an interesting read. IN going from the back of your pages,I realize I had already done THAT way too, and I had to skip some from the back end. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 11/13/2008 12:59:00 AM
Your comments on my poem led me to yours which i loved reading and i noticed how the slightest sounds inspire u.. now, I'm aware of noise as a potential muse :) Love, D
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Date: 10/30/2008 8:04:00 PM
LOL great with this one, Daver. I've always wanted to try a Pollock paint but could never find a big enough canvas ... smile ... What a wonderful write you've done and its a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:55:00 AM
Daver congrats on having this interesting write featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 8:47:00 AM
This is so clever and interesting. Not what it appears at first! Congratulations on this creative, unusual writing! ~Great job! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 6:33:00 AM
Congrats Daver on "The Art of Dental Floss" being featured this week. There's more interest when the message is hidden between the lines. I guess that's why the abstract is more often described as genius than the "put it on the line" type of art. Food for thought. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:36:00 AM
Daver,Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:58:00 PM
The vivid imagery and creative format work well in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 3:13:00 PM
Warmest congrats Daver on your unique and wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/13/2008 6:01:00 AM
Only a man with a very poetic heart could come up with this masterpiece. BRILLIANT! It is so nice to be home at the soup again. I have missed you. Love, lainie
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Date: 7/11/2008 12:13:00 PM
You are too much! Slightly gross but completely hilarious! What a creative mind you have. Actually, might just have been a good piece of advice for our poor Mr. Pollock! Could you imagine??? Love it! Love, Shar
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