The Anxieties of a Widow

May stretched its legs into grave.
The thunder heralds the rains.
A hut on the bank of Kanoli canal
Is not re-thatched this year.
Her infant’s illness made the doctor gay
With all the wages she had kept.
Summer takes the last breath,
But the coconut leaf thatched roof
Is not re-thatched this year.

As the widow stands on the threshold,
The rain clouds gather over her sky,
And the wind scatters terror in her corridor.
Will the tattered roof be flown away?
Will the rain drops make pores
On the roof of her life?
Where will her child crawl and smile?
Question waves are thus getting high;
Her canoe is ready to be tossed.


(The summer season ends in the month of May and rainy season begins in the month of June in Kerala)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Peck Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 11:51 AM
A beautiful story of a widow's anxiety.
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:26 PM
I love the story in the write, and I see the struggle of the lives it portrays
Tate Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Interesting poem
M V Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, James Tate. Have a lovely day!
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Revisiting your number one on the list of your personal best poetry, Fabiyas. It truly is a great poem.
Tomar Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 6:43 AM
A beautiful read. The picture is so clear of the distraught widow, a happy doctor and an ailing child! And while I'm reading it there are clouds thundering outside just about to burst...it certainly is the rainy season in India. What a co-incidence I had to read your poem at just the right time!
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May 16, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, a very moving read/
Dom Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Wow! I feel you my friend.
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February 6, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Congrats on your win, captured the image portraid in your poem writing, have a blessed evening, debra
Roberts Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 6:03 AM
Well done, truly a winner.....Seren
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October 30, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Congrats on your win. Your poem deserved the win Fabyias.
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October 26, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Wow! Great imagery I feel the texture see the darkness and taste the rain. You deserved the win.
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October 18, 2012 at 8:51 PM
FAb.. congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest Winners" It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
Gooden Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Congrats on your win, Fabiyas.
Sefunmi Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 7:59 AM
This is a lovely write!
Iberi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 2:40 PM
I so much Love the Imagery you have created. Wonderful Poem. Worth the price.
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September 17, 2012 at 4:15 PM
A chilling and gripping read. You`ve captured so much emotions and expressions in the piece. Very moving. A well deserved win. Million congratulations! Hugs..
Lempadi Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 3:40 AM
A wonderful poem, congrets
Gasun Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on your big win. A beautiful poem. How exciting.Love, Joyce
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August 5, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations onoyur win in this big contest.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:58 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Fab. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on this winning poem. Well deserved !! Very moving poem...
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August 1, 2012 at 4:08 AM
congratulations on your win!!!
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July 31, 2012 at 6:34 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Goff Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Great Work, Fabiyas! jim
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