The Angels Could Have-

The Angels Could Have…

The angels came to praise the Savior's birth.
Where in a manger wrapped in rags He lay.
God’s greatest gift to all mankind on earth,
Christ, grew to know His Father day by day.

A mortal man called; Joseph knew God’s plan.
He married Mother Mary his betrothed.
A vision came to him, oh, blessed man.
And set love on the road that God proposed.

His earthly parents raised Him as a man.
And God the Father trained Him in right ways.
In Nazareth Christ Jesus knew God’s plan
And taught the word of God to kings and slaves.

Alas the time had come for sacrifice.
The garden where He prayed, “Thy will, not mine…” 
His life, betrayed by kiss, sold for a price.
That very night, to God, His will resigned.

The angels in the heavens would have come.
But never did He from us turn His face.
Sin nailed Him to the cross and stood it plumb.
Because of His great love we have God’s grace.


© © Dane Smith-Johnsen
January 30, 2010
Poetic form: Iambic Pentameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Dear Dane Ann, my congratulations on your poem winning a place in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments today! Peace and love, Audrey
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Dane Ann, Congratulations on your win. This is beautifully written and very inspirational. Blessings, Connie
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February 1, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Dane, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in the Faith contest to my other comment. Keep that faith shining! Enjoy your honor. Karen
Johnson Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Hi Dane Ann. Congratulations on winning with this lovely poem and your comments on mine. I agree Peter's denial was God's plan and the faith of those followers of Jesus was phenominal and Peter's role second to none. My post crucifixion faith cannot compare. Love, Joyce
Dufresne Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Wonderful meditation. Congratulations Dane Ann. Robert
Owens Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:02 PM
God's Grace...isn't it wonderful?? Just like your poem...it speaks to us all..Enjoyed...Marty
Beam Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Great write and writings thanks for congrats and the kind words as far as Jim goes only distantanly related and about killed myself with that stuff and Jesus could have also I am glad he chose the cross aint no rock gonna cry in place praise Jesus Holy name!
La France Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Please check your soup mail.
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:54 PM
A great write, Dane. Yes, it's too bad you missed that contest because this could have been the number one winner! I liked how you gave significance to the garden. He sufferered all our sins in that place.Also. "sin nailed him to the cross" Very powerful line. LUv, Andrea
La France Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:45 PM
This is very beautifully written, I am truly sorry you missed my Angel contest. but keep this in mind for another contest, I am sure it will fit in one of them.. perhaps the very next one...
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:17 PM
The last line says it all, Dane Ann. You have a gift for spiritual motivation. Enjoyed this one very much! Love, Carolyn
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January 30, 2010 at 1:39 PM
What an inspirational poem. Good way to share a faith message. If this is for Constance's angel contest, good luck. Keep your faith shining. Karen
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Beautiful poem. A great tribute. Thanks for sharing.
Haick Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Beautiful, Dane-Ann. Our Lord's passion never ceases to amaze me. This is well-written and inspirational. Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you for reading and leaving your kind comments on my poem. Peace and love, Audrey
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January 30, 2010 at 8:51 AM
plumb; a word few understand that my grand parents used often. yes Plumb discribes what He did. John H Loving III
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