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The Angel Fell

She had always risen hovered over us lifted our spirits drew attention away from our flaws of tree of character. A weathered warrior she bore the burden of topping a tilted tree protecting childhood’s dreams raising our vision. The gifts overtook the season bulbs and tinsel mocked her dimming glow a faint remembrance of cold rooms footy pajamas. Frail with age she lingered past her time clinging to a hope that failed the year the angel fell. ©12/4/2018 Contest - A Sad Christmas Sponsor – Dear Heart

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Date: 12/17/2018 2:54:00 AM
- Many factors can make Christmas an extra heavy time, John - Congratulations on your winning poem - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 6:52:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Date: 12/8/2018 5:17:00 AM
Made me feel quite emotional John, I'm sure Constance will love this, I've just read your comments and know you will have an awesome time celebrating. We no longer put the large tree up just a small one on the windowsill which was given to us by a dear friend a few years before she passed away, the wooden angel decoration hangs at the top in her memory;-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 12/8/2018 5:35:00 AM
Jan, I have heard the expression "Beware, lest you entertain angels unaware"...many time. I think it played into this poem as I feel we are sometime the unwary angels...
Date: 12/5/2018 7:35:00 AM
Wow!...great write my friend...love the fallen angel verses lol...ready for a win John...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks WW, I think we've all had to dust off our "angel wings" on occasion....
Date: 12/4/2018 9:45:00 AM
riveting in a way that subtly suggests a pained christmas.... good one, john..huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 12/4/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I was just thinking about this year...My daughters tree, decorated by our grandchildren...ages 27, 23, 4 and 1.5......a true thing of beauty....

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