The Angel Fell

She had always risen
hovered over us
lifted  our spirits
drew attention away from
our flaws of tree
of character.

A weathered warrior
she bore the burden
of topping a tilted tree
protecting childhood’s dreams
raising our vision.

The gifts overtook the season
bulbs and tinsel mocked
her dimming glow
a faint remembrance
of cold rooms
footy pajamas.

Frail with age
she lingered past her time
clinging to a hope
that failed
the year
the angel fell.


©12/4/2018

Contest - A Sad Christmas

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Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 2:54 AM
- Many factors can make Christmas an extra heavy time, John - Congratulations on your winning poem - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:52 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Made me feel quite emotional John, I'm sure Constance will love this, I've just read your comments and know you will have an awesome time celebrating. We no longer put the large tree up just a small one on the windowsill which was given to us by a dear friend a few years before she passed away, the wooden angel decoration hangs at the top in her memory;-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Jan, I have heard the expression "Beware, lest you entertain angels unaware"...many time. I think it played into this poem as I feel we are sometime the unwary angels...
Warrior Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Wow!...great write my friend...love the fallen angel verses lol...ready for a win John...^WW^
Lawless Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks WW, I think we've all had to dust off our "angel wings" on occasion....
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:45 AM
riveting in a way that subtly suggests a pained christmas.... good one, john..huggs
Lawless Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Nette, I was just thinking about this year...My daughters tree, decorated by our grandchildren...ages 27, 23, 4 and 1.5......a true thing of beauty....
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