The Ancients

It's my last day with the old giants
 In mourning I hike the lost trails,
 sniffing the aroma of the bark,
 that cinnamon of the forest
 Under tepees of wood
 in a membrane of shadows,
 I stalk the earth, its mammal traces,
 its elusive tracks,
 to sit on a fallen log
 where spiders macramé,
 moss sloping to my knees
 unaware of invisibles within,
 grubbing in their tunnels
 A lizard taps my foot,
 responding, I muse to its touch,
 my thoughts like Indian visions,
 And when daylight mushrooms into night,
 and an owl hoots from cedar,
 I still sit with a lizard on my shoe
 Huddled with the ancients of the woods
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 8:21 PM
You took us with you to the jungle, thank you. Congrad's Light & Love
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 8:35 PM
I'm back for a second time, Mario, to congratulations on your wonderful win..~*
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Hey Mario, nice write, I thought it a little vague, would have preferred more specifics, but worthy of a fine placement!
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June 6, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Congrats on a fine win.
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Congratulations on your win:-)
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June 5, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Hi Mario. Congratulations on your win in my contest. The pendulum swings very subtly in the background of your poem. In terms of punctuation, as pondered by Debbie, it might also make sense to abandon all punctuation. Many wishes, Kai
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May 20, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Mario I enjoy the imagery in your poem :) Can you please put in periods at the end of each thought. SOUP mail Light & Love
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