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The Ancients

It's my last day with the old giants In mourning I hike the lost trails, sniffing the aroma of the bark, that cinnamon of the forest Under tepees of wood in a membrane of shadows, I stalk the earth, its mammal traces, its elusive tracks, to sit on a fallen log where spiders macramé, moss sloping to my knees unaware of invisibles within, grubbing in their tunnels A lizard taps my foot, responding, I muse to its touch, my thoughts like Indian visions, And when daylight mushrooms into night, and an owl hoots from cedar, I still sit with a lizard on my shoe Huddled with the ancients of the woods

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/21/2017 8:21:00 PM
You took us with you to the jungle, thank you. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2017 8:35:00 PM
I'm back for a second time, Mario, to congratulations on your wonderful win..~*
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Date: 6/14/2017 9:43:00 AM
Hey Mario, nice write, I thought it a little vague, would have preferred more specifics, but worthy of a fine placement!
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Date: 6/6/2017 8:10:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 6/5/2017 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:-)
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Date: 6/5/2017 9:23:00 AM
Hi Mario. Congratulations on your win in my contest. The pendulum swings very subtly in the background of your poem. In terms of punctuation, as pondered by Debbie, it might also make sense to abandon all punctuation. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/20/2017 4:20:00 PM
Mario I enjoy the imagery in your poem :) Can you please put in periods at the end of each thought. SOUP mail Light & Love
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