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The Anatomy of a Horse (written for children) Horse's feet have a hoof, the hard part which he can pound, back of this is his frog, bottom part that stays off the ground. Between his hoof and his leg is a coronet, not like a crown it blends into the pastern the start of his leg, now don’t frown. Next is his fetlock, sort of an ankle, not a real lock. Horse's rear ankle turns backwards and that it is called his hock. His fetlock has a callous called an ergot, can you see? Then comes his harmless cannon, just below his hock or knee. On the front leg, it's a knee between forearm and cannon His hind leg has a hock which joins gaskin to his cannon. His elbow in the front and his stifle in the back, no fibs, connect his upper legs to his barrel which is our horse's ribs. Topside of the barrel, where a rider sits, twixt tail and head, highest part of horse's rump is called a croup instead. The dock is the soft part from which grows his tail, what the heck; above his high shoulders are withers, right beneath his neck. Behind his ears is a part called his poll, close to his brain? From his poll, hair makes a forelock, back down his neck, a mane. We’ve finally reached his head and the last part, called his muzzle, his jaw, his nose and mouth. A horse can be quite a puzzle. written October 28, 2016 for Shadow's contest, Horses

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Date: 6/17/2017 9:19:00 PM
What a fun refresher course! So long ago my horse crazy years :) I love this.
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:36:00 AM
not really familiar with horses as a rider, but as a teacher. Thanks for the comment, Maureen, appreciated.
Date: 12/9/2016 10:10:00 PM
Wow! I feel like I've just been to school. Great description! I learned a lot. And, congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/27/2016 5:54:00 AM
Well, I hope you love school as much as I do. 17 years of my own schooling plus 40 years teaching public school and then there's Sunday School for at least 10 more years. I appreciate your insightful comment.
Date: 11/28/2016 11:52:00 AM
I have ridden horses from the age of 3 to 73. Your poem reminds me of when I joined 4-have at age 8 and we were required to learn all the parts of a horse. Thanks for the trip back in time.
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Date: 11/1/2016 10:52:00 PM
You are very knowledgeable I found it very interesting. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Reason:-)a very clear way teaching children about horse's body.
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. It was a learning experience for me too.
Date: 10/31/2016 2:50:00 PM
Reason, your poem is so well-written and so full of information perfect for children or anyone who does not know many facts about horses. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:53:00 PM
I'm glad you liked the read and how I approached the prompt. Thanks a bunch, Sandra.
Date: 10/31/2016 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top win my dear friend, Reason!Hugs and cheers!
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:50:00 PM
Your encouragement is appreciated, Galeo DS.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:51:00 AM
Dear Reason, wonderful write on anatomy of horses with a lovely rhyme scheme!Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
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Date: 10/30/2016 10:59:00 PM
This is a keeper Reason! Congratulations on the marvelous way you presented this poem, and on your first place win which is so deserving! 7 ; )
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:49:00 PM
thanks, Connie, appreciate the read and the kind remarks.
Date: 10/30/2016 9:01:00 AM
You made it seem so easy, Reason:) wonderful!! congratulations on well deserved win:) a #7:)
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:26:00 PM
thanks, Jo, it was an engaging topic and I love children.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congrats on a great win
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:30:00 PM
thank you, Joseph.
Date: 10/30/2016 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement! -luloo :)
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:29:00 PM
thank you, luloo. Haven't been on a horse in years. But back in the long ago days, I loved to ride.
Date: 10/30/2016 6:47:00 AM
I could see an older child memorizing your poem as they learn to ride and care for their horse. Congrats, Reason!
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:30:00 PM
What a nice thought. Thanks for the encouragement, Kim.

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