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June. 20.2024
Carpe Diem Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
~ PLACED FIRST~

 

“Never spend your time in anticipation of a future, procrastinating and thinking that we have so much of time ahead and many more opportunities on our way. But nothing is certain, only the present time and chances. They are in our hold and are ours. Make the best use of them.” ~ By Poet With the night quickly passing by, My soul breaks into blossoms of joy. When the sun begins his solemn race, In my ears fall the birds’ hymns of praise. As the wind passes tousling my hair, With soft whisperings in my ear, I catch the strains of a Heavenly band, And feel the presence of a loving friend. Glancing on the gorgeous buds of May, Swaying in breeze that make me gay, I lose myself in the glory of creation, And fold my hands in deep veneration. When I hear the cuckoo pouring in shower, Her songs from far flung forest glade or bower, A delightful rhythm fills my space, And its fleeting cadence brightens up my face. But suddenly I sense a creeping pain, As I see a cripple staggering in strain, At a distance, I see a weeping child, Abandoned by its mother behind a thicket wild. Around me I see the homeless and the frail, Wandering aimless, tossed by life’s violent gale. Thus I see life with grim challenges of trials and strife, Where misfortune, distress and betrayal, so very rife. At times I feel my heart missing a beat, And fear the sweep of sand under my feet. This Earth often turns a blistering desert, But sure with shady oases, strewn apart. This is the irrefutable truth, for sure, That life can at once be sweet and sour. So, enjoy life when it is within our scope and scheme. Squeeze every happy moment. Carpe Diem!

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Date: 8/7/2024 2:36:00 PM
Valsa, love the quote and the poem, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, well done, Constance
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Date: 6/28/2024 1:14:00 PM
Lovely write Valsa. I liked the way you finished it! great message! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a Beautiful/Lovely write. Yes, make every moment last. I love your ending. Enjoy your day as you write it away.......................
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Date: 6/24/2024 5:51:00 PM
So much wisdom, knowledge and understanding of the world you have to share with this world coming from your loving spirit: )
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Date: 6/22/2024 9:32:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Is this happening to Andrea too? I wrote a long comment, and it disappeared, and I see some error! Frustrating!Probably I should wait before writing the same comment again!
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Date: 6/22/2024 8:21:00 PM
I know how frustrating it is that we cannot post a comment, especially a long one, once it is written. However thanks Mala for your effort.
Date: 6/22/2024 9:28:00 AM
Hmmm looks like you still get my comments even when it goes to error 500 first
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Date: 6/22/2024 8:19:00 PM
I am sorry Andrea that you find difficulty in posting your comments on my page, though it is not my fault. Thanks for your attempt.
Date: 6/22/2024 1:16:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Valsa, we should enjoy every day that comes our way, no one knows what the future has in store, every day is precious, that’s for sure… Beryl
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Date: 6/21/2024 2:40:00 PM
You have a beautiful heart sweet valsa, this poem is a sign of that and shows how deeply you feel for everything around and how grateful you are for little things, we live in a selfish world that is in need of more individuals like you! I really love the presentation of words here, in your poem, and how this flows in such eloquence! I felt alot as i read this and im inspired to write now for this prompt, thanks to you! I must say this is another one of my faves from your soul! I especially love “Around me I see the homeless and the frail, Wandering aimless, tossed by life’s violent gale. Thus I see life with grim challenges of trials and strife, Where misfortune, distress and betrayal, so very rife.” Soul hitting’ so powerful and moving! A fave
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Date: 6/21/2024 11:21:00 AM
Beautiful ... making it count, Valsa, TC and Aloha, William
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Date: 6/21/2024 10:23:00 AM
It is an eternal truth that present is the only state we should live in. Perfect Carpe Diem for life.
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Date: 6/21/2024 9:49:00 AM
Live every day like it's your last and while health allows, we just don't know what's around the corner. Hope you're keeping well Valsa. Tom
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Date: 6/21/2024 8:07:00 AM
"This is the irrefutable truth, for sure, That life can at once be sweet and sour. So, enjoy life when it is within our scope and scheme. Squeeze every happy moment. Carpe Diem!" -- Sad how people disrespect, abuse something that none of us can create -- only destroy. Powerful write! Life is precious: Squeeze out of every possible-filled-second, a blossoming hour.
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Date: 6/21/2024 7:17:00 AM
Yes, life has its ups and downs. I really enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 6/21/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Very moving and beautifully reflective. I like the philosophical depth you employ. I think it makes this, like many of your other poems, truly captivating in my mind. For I felt the joy of blossoms, the sacredness of creation, and yes, the sorrow of human suffering all in one piece. Oh, yes, the delicate balance between life's everyday joys and challenges should urge every one of us to seize the present every day. I always love how your poems are so thought-provoking and leave me pondering well after reading each one of them. Good luck in the contest! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/21/2024 5:04:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I could not agree with you more! You have so beautifully crafted an important reminder and one that I always try to keep! I've seen first hand how things can turn on a dime and even as I write, I am trying to savor each sip of coffee and the peace that this particular morning brings! Carpe Diem!!!! Excellent xxoo
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Date: 6/20/2024 4:59:00 PM
Definitely, this poem fits the contest category. I like the sense of question, then answer. It was like a heartfelt story of reality. I love the read.
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Date: 6/20/2024 10:46:00 AM
You take us to the highs..way way up and then the lowest lows. Well done, Valsa!
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