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The Ambiance

In chilly sensation held
Wrapped within warm quilt
I could almost feel my balmy
Breath condense through the 
Air
With the odor of my favorite
Scents swarming through my
Hair
I sit with passion, my divan positioned
My posture upright, my thoughts
Engaged
My room lit just right
My table perfectly placed
I focus, I think
I stare

Glasses on, books on the 
Right pages… pens, pencils, 
Some papers to solve upon
Then tear…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/30/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Farah once again. I've been commenting on this since last May and its been a winner all along ... smile ... know you're probably busy with school but I hope you come back soon with more great writing!! Love ya ....
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:20:00 AM
You certainly set the stage when you write, Farah, and I'm glad you received recognitiion in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2010 7:34:00 AM
GREAt writing on YOUR writing, and a big Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this, Farah--I wish you also the best in the PS contest :)
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:37:00 PM
Very interesting write, Farah! Great win and congratulations to you! Glad you are here gotta go back and read some of your poems. been a while!-Robert
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Date: 9/29/2009 11:51:00 AM
Farah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:02:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:44:00 AM
Beautiful! dear Farah. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:44:00 PM
Hi Farah Congratulations on making the first round on the finals contest! Love Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:10:00 AM
Young One Farah, congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:11:00 AM
Well done, Farah best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/27/2009 10:58:00 AM
Great to see your writing featured, farah !! I loved this back in May and here it appears this week! Wonderful title inviting us in and a well-deserved selection to be featured. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Farah. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Young One, on the featuring of "Ambiance." Store away, don't tear. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 4:27:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the last stanza. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:17:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:15:00 AM
Farah your poetry is always something to admire - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/21/2009 11:47:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Farah.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:46:00 AM
Smile~I just came back to read this again, and to say hello to "You Farah Chamma"~I always think about where "You" are, and what life may be like for "You!?"~I 'Always' hope that it is happy? I 'Always' hope that for "You," from the most sincerest and deepest of my heart & soul!! Smile, I hope "You" are well~"My Love Always & Forever To You & Yours, John!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/2/2009 1:50:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery in this creative view. The last stanza surprised me. Good Job! Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/27/2009 12:29:00 AM
That's one great poem Farah.. Keep up the excellent work ;)
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:54:00 PM
Beautiful writing inviting us into your world and reflecting your title with the skill of a master, farah. I've been away for awhile with more than just a tear ... more like gut wrenching sobs for my dog now gone to the dog angels ... sad. Imagine you are busy with studies but I am so glad you still post here at the Soup. Much love ...
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:06:00 AM
A week of hell huh. It will be over, I am confident that you shall succeed in this life with your passion and strength. Love, Sami.
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:58:00 AM
well, great piece. we've just got to engage ourselves in something worthwhile. Farah, I, missed you and your comment. I have been busy with my studies and other extra curricular activities. I realy missed the family life we lived on soupland. I wish I would get back fully soon. I am onb break..... Please read this poems of mine. MY FARAH-WAY FRIEND, and THY CHAINS OH FARAH...They are dedicated to you. hope to hear from you soonest. 'Leke
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