Farah Chamma Poet Free verse

The Ambiance

In chilly sensation held
Wrapped within warm quilt
I could almost feel my balmy
Breath condense through the 
Air
With the odor of my favorite
Scents swarming through my
Hair
I sit with passion, my divan positioned
My posture upright, my thoughts
Engaged
My room lit just right
My table perfectly placed
I focus, I think
I stare

Glasses on, books on the 
Right pages… pens, pencils, 
Some papers to solve upon
Then tear…

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Sue Mason January 30, 2010 at 10:11 AM Congratulations Farah once again. I've been commenting on this since last May and its been a winner all along ... smile ... know you're probably busy with school but I hope you come back soon with more great writing!! Love ya ....

Carolyn Devonshire January 29, 2010 at 1:20 AM You certainly set the stage when you write, Farah, and I'm glad you received recognitiion in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2010 at 7:34 AM GREAt writing on YOUR writing, and a big Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 27, 2010 at 9:02 PM Congrats on your win with this, Farah--I wish you also the best in the PS contest :)

Robert A. Dufresne January 27, 2010 at 6:37 PM Very interesting write, Farah! Great win and congratulations to you! Glad you are here gotta go back and read some of your poems. been a while!-Robert

Raul Moreno September 29, 2009 at 11:51 AM Farah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

September 25, 2009 at 2:02 PM Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Elaine George September 25, 2009 at 3:44 AM Beautiful! dear Farah. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie

Laura Mckenzie September 24, 2009 at 6:44 PM Hi Farah Congratulations on making the first round on the finals contest! Love Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2009 at 10:10 AM Young One Farah, congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Brian Strand September 24, 2009 at 9:11 AM Well done, Farah best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason June 27, 2009 at 10:58 AM Great to see your writing featured, farah !! I loved this back in May and here it appears this week! Wonderful title inviting us in and a well-deserved selection to be featured. Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 25, 2009 at 10:44 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Farah. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 25, 2009 at 9:29 AM Congratulations Young One, on the featuring of "Ambiance." Store away, don't tear. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff June 23, 2009 at 1:25 PM Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando

June 22, 2009 at 4:27 PM Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the last stanza. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown June 22, 2009 at 2:17 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week

Michael Jordan June 22, 2009 at 7:15 AM Farah your poetry is always something to admire - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand June 21, 2009 at 11:47 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week Farah.Rgds Brian

John Rhinem June 5, 2009 at 12:46 AM Smile~I just came back to read this again, and to say hello to "You Farah Chamma"~I always think about where "You" are, and what life may be like for "You!?"~I 'Always' hope that it is happy? I 'Always' hope that for "You," from the most sincerest and deepest of my heart & soul!! Smile, I hope "You" are well~"My Love Always & Forever To You & Yours, John!!!":):) Bye ~

June 2, 2009 at 1:50 PM Interesting use of imagery in this creative view. The last stanza surprised me. Good Job! Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

June Rouhana May 27, 2009 at 12:29 AM That's one great poem Farah.. Keep up the excellent work ;)

Sue Mason May 25, 2009 at 10:54 PM Beautiful writing inviting us into your world and reflecting your title with the skill of a master, farah. I've been away for awhile with more than just a tear ... more like gut wrenching sobs for my dog now gone to the dog angels ... sad. Imagine you are busy with studies but I am so glad you still post here at the Soup. Much love ...

Sami Al-Khalili May 25, 2009 at 8:06 AM A week of hell huh. It will be over, I am confident that you shall succeed in this life with your passion and strength. Love, Sami.

Adeleke Adeite May 20, 2009 at 7:58 AM well, great piece. we've just got to engage ourselves in something worthwhile. Farah, I, missed you and your comment. I have been busy with my studies and other extra curricular activities. I realy missed the family life we lived on soupland. I wish I would get back fully soon. I am onb break..... Please read this poems of mine. MY FARAH-WAY FRIEND, and THY CHAINS OH FARAH...They are dedicated to you. hope to hear from you soonest. 'Leke

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