The Alone

(No Hope)

The alone... oppresses me. She settles inside of the life she has stole, leaving the shell of me, as cold as stone. Oblivion so close I can feel it's low groan. For my sadness and sin you now make me atone. I can't bear the weight of the cost of your toll. It presses me down, my body left prone. I try and I try to escape my hellhole, but scream as I might no one will come. My courage betrays me and I'm chilled to the bone. I fear deep inside me I can never go home, like leaves on a breeze my hope has now flown. The alone... surrounds me. She beckons me, emptying my soul. Her darkness engulfs me, everything gone. The nothing inside of me, but dark seeds you have sewn. The sorrow so thick I can't breath on my own. I wade through the mud of memories you control. My heart has withdrawn, lost in the unknown. Deeper and deeper drowning in this hole, I scratch at this pit till my fingers are numb. My story but a book of indifferent monotone. No escape can I find from this perilous tome, as my spirit lies dying beneath this tombstone.
12/18/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/6/2016 11:10:00 AM
Do not worry about missing my comments, I miss your comments too. :) I'm just being silly. Hugs
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Date: 1/26/2016 10:14:00 PM
JAMES, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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James Inman
Date: 2/5/2016 10:56:00 AM
PD, I'm sorry I missed your nice comment, thank you.
Date: 1/20/2016 2:48:00 AM
A deep verse indeed.... Congrats James, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Teddy.
Date: 1/18/2016 8:57:00 AM
JAMES, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
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James Inman
Date: 1/18/2016 10:13:00 AM
Thank you SKAT.
Date: 1/17/2016 1:00:00 PM
Powerfully expressed,sad, with a sense of no outlet anywhere, James. Hope the new year has brought a change in emotions! Congratulations on this worthy win. // paul
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James Inman
Date: 1/17/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Paul, as always, my emotions are fleeting but the tone of my poems are not necessarily my emotional state at the time (although sometimes they are).
Date: 1/16/2016 11:17:00 PM
Very well done, James. Congrats on your win. Well deserved.
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James Inman
Date: 1/17/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Scott.
Date: 1/16/2016 5:32:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 1/17/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you always Jan.
Date: 1/16/2016 12:47:00 PM
James, congrats on your placement in the contest :) *smiles* -luloo
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James Inman
Date: 1/17/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 1/1/2016 5:23:00 PM
Change the channel, change the channel, change the channel! As with you other poems I enjoyed tonight, I know this feeling, too, and that's what I do - change the channel. Your writes have a way of touching deep hurting places inside us all if we've lived long enough. A great write, James ... 7 ... CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:38:00 AM
I'm afraid my sets been stuck on one channel for the last couple of weeks, CayCay. Thanks for the advice, though.
Date: 12/31/2015 9:12:00 PM
Ah, yes..I know the deep feeling that Alone can bring. She can be a gift and a friend at certain times. This poem is gorgeous, James. I really enjoyed reading. Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 12/31/2015 9:23:00 PM
The double edged sword. Sometimes painful and sometimes beautiful.
Date: 12/26/2015 4:38:00 PM
Hi James, sometimes I find myself to often there too. :( Again, thank you for replying to my comment on the bottom. How sweet. LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 10:09:00 PM
Love this James, my story, my book... WOW... I know the feeling of drowning. Love LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 12/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
Hi PD, glad you liked it. I'm afraid, far too often, I find myself in this place.
Date: 12/24/2015 12:55:00 PM
Fear, anxiety, depression....the deep holes that can consume so much and leave one so alone. A great write James
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James Inman
Date: 12/24/2015 1:42:00 PM
Njeri, thank you for visiting two of my poems today and the nice comments.
Date: 12/23/2015 1:01:00 PM
Wow a very powerful... I see myself in this poem, I feel the sadness. A well written poem James. The alone can oppress us all. :) keep your head up and stay true to yourself. A powerful write brother.
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James Inman
Date: 12/23/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thank you for the comment Chris.
Date: 12/22/2015 11:39:00 AM
Dear James A meaningful touching piece here my friend, enjoyed, wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas to you and yours, may all your wishes come true my friend glad you enjoyed my poem also, cheri
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thank you and best wishes to you as well. Have a wonderful Christmas.
Date: 12/20/2015 5:17:00 AM
- Oh .... this was a touching poetry, James - Today I just want to wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas ! - Huge Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Inman
Date: 12/20/2015 9:49:00 AM
Anne Lise, thank you, and I hope you have a Christmas filled with happiness and the joy of the company of those you love.
Date: 12/18/2015 4:21:00 PM
Gosh James I would love to know the story behind this deep dark write I found the imagery quite chilling:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/18/2015 6:02:00 PM
Jan, I must admit there is not much of a story, just emotion. The darkness inside all of us I suppose.
Date: 12/18/2015 11:42:00 AM
What a deep deep write....So dark and sad....so full of angst. I have felt these feelings...often. Great write.
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James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 12:32:00 PM
Nice of you to visit Eileen, I feel for your sad moments but sometimes they are the ones that make me feel most alive and make me wonder how much would be lost if I wasn't here. Wishing you only happiness Eileen. Thank you.
Date: 12/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
James this is dark and an excellent write. I wish no one to have to experience that what you have cleverly described.
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James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Michael. One of those writes that kind of write themselves.
Date: 12/18/2015 8:47:00 AM
oh my the last phrase seals his fate. Wouldn't it be awful if the spirit could not even escape the body when lying beneath the ground? You captured that feeling well. Lots of monorhyme with that OWN sound!! I enjoyed this read, Ralph.
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James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Thought I'd write a nice upbeat Christmas poem, HaHa.
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