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The Allure of Your Words



                  9/29/2023

Some can allure me, just with their eyes,
As I can see their souls, and oh, I do sigh!

The intoxicating words. that set my soul on fire.
As a winged ship’s lanterns glow, ashine with desire.

Enthralled, moved, by poets’ soul-dancing reflections.
Conveying utter beauty, for countless generations!

Words do open magical, winding, emerald pathways.
Wherein, your heart can dance fully and spiritually play!

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Fisher Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Enjoyed your poem comparing the two love combatants, duking it out to win your admiration. Very well weaved together.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Hey David, your analysis of the poem is spot on! Love your expression, well-weaved, as well. So original.L hard to believe we are into October….almost! Pangie xx
Eagle Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 11:07 AM
A beautiful poem to enjoy today. Thank you for sharing with us.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 11:17 AM
I do try, Elena, but-know what real poetry looks like.. mine is quite simplistic and not meant ti impress, just express and share my heat, thank you. Pangie xx
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:33 PM
That last stanza has a powerful meaning. As this line has my attention," As a winged ship’s lanterns glow, ashine with desire." A ship to guide. Wonderful peace, Pangie. Many blessings to you and yours my friend
Romios Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Hurrah! Love when a reader…chooses the same favorite line as you did! Have a a magical weekend, Eve.. Pangie xxx
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