The Allure of Your Words

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9/29/2023 Some can allure me, just with their eyes, As I can see their souls, and oh, I do sigh! The intoxicating words. that set my soul on fire. As a winged ship’s lanterns glow, ashine with desire. Enthralled, moved, by poets’ soul-dancing reflections. Conveying utter beauty, for countless generations! Words do open magical, winding, emerald pathways. Wherein, your heart can dance fully and spiritually play!

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David Fisher

Date: 9/30/2023 12:57:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem comparing the two love combatants, duking it out to win your admiration. Very well weaved together.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/30/2023 1:07:00 PM

Hey David, your analysis of the poem is spot on! Love your expression, well-weaved, as well. So original.L hard to believe we are into October….almost! Pangie xx

Elena Eagle

Date: 9/30/2023 11:07:00 AM

A beautiful poem to enjoy today. Thank you for sharing with us.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/30/2023 11:17:00 AM

I do try, Elena, but-know what real poetry looks like.. mine is quite simplistic and not meant ti impress, just express and share my heat, thank you. Pangie xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2023 8:33:00 PM

That last stanza has a powerful meaning. As this line has my attention," As a winged ship’s lanterns glow, ashine with desire." A ship to guide. Wonderful peace, Pangie. Many blessings to you and yours my friend

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/29/2023 9:44:00 PM

Hurrah! Love when a reader…chooses the same favorite line as you did! Have a a magical weekend, Eve.. Pangie xxx