The Allegory of the Cage

The Allegory of the Cage

I have not written much of late;
I toil in my hamster wheel.
While ev'ry sage of ev'ry age
Will gape with wonder at my cage,
And speak in voices small and still
About my stilted, careworn gait.

Yet when I do find time to write,
I'll leave my cage, in mind alone.
But if I'm sad and terror-clad,
You'll know how deeply I've gone mad,
When slashing sinew, skin and bone
To cleave a thought on pages white.

Now writ with expurgated bile,
My caustic words are dark and spare.
I've filled the pages with my rages
Over others' self-made cages.
As they trudge without a care
And bear it all with practiced smile.

For, I know what they don't see;
Our hamster wheels are hooked to naught.
With blinded sight, and faces tight,
They churn and burn their wheels with might,
And not a lone, insightful thought
Will loose their bonds and set them free.

I cry out loud, an anguished howl,
Still knowing I will join back in.
Yet all the tears from lengths of years
While fleeing from our deepest fears,
Can never heal a single sin,
Nor soothe away a single scowl. 

So, in I go to man my post.
I coax my wheel back up to speed.
I'm better now. I know not how,
But sidle up beside my trough
And eat the slop I do not need,
Because I'm better off than most.

I have not written much but this,
My musings on a ghastly fate:
We turn our wheels and chase our heels
Forgetting how it truly feels
To live and die, to love and hate;
Our ignorance indeed is bliss.

© Copyright 2007 Shawn H. Hall - All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/26/2015 5:04:00 PM
Enjoying the feeling of this blissful poem all over again
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Date: 4/16/2013 5:21:00 PM
Shawn :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2013 1:39:00 AM
SKAT, thanks for the warm welcome. It is much appreciated. I do like the people whom I have met so far. Everyone has been kind and friendly. I am extremely busy these days but, time permitting, I will return to read the posts from the kind people who have made me feel at home from day one. And that's you! Thanks again, Shawn H.
Date: 4/7/2013 7:18:00 PM
Well, some age is shown here. Very clever and creative yet bold in concept. This is a true winner..... Hope to see more from you..... Jake
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Shawn Hall
Date: 4/9/2013 3:31:00 AM
Hi again, Jake. You flatter me, but it is still nice to hear. A lot of work goes into a poem such as this, so I am glad that you enjoyed it. When I get some time, I can't wait to read some of your work. Thanks again. Shawn H.
Date: 4/7/2013 12:12:00 PM
a deep poem you share Shawn, glad you feel the way you do...pd
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:50:00 PM
HAHA, you get around. I just started and here you are. Well, I have an appointment to go to, but you can believe that I will be reading your "artwork" when I return. Thanks for being so vigilant... ;-) Shawn H.
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