The Aisle Seems So Rugged

Standing on the border-line covered by an itchy rug two worlds, two lives, one person, in less than an hour, freedom is expired, taking the next step, quite unclear and foggy, responsibilities so welcoming and giving a big hug Ecstasy clouded by uncertainties, joy amidst fears of the future, reality surfacing like threats from a thug and giving alert as though faced with wild dogs. But hell yeah! The transition seems naturally plain and no need for any form of disdain Switching to a life of complete companionship, getting comfort from a bosom so meek, sharing breath with a heart always available, all plaster the bricks of the mind even when such gross anxiety knocks on its door The bold step has been taken let the aisle be decorated for the groom is here!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzzi Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 10:49 AM
How great a married man showing JOY. Light & love
Makama Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Yeah Debbie.. Thanks for the comment
Ward Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Proclamatory and fine write, Funom. // 7 // Julia, :)
Makama Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Thank you so much Julia Ward
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April 28, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Funam, this piece is a great description of what it is like to fight the world to find and keep true love. Also could be interpreted as one leaving a home of anger and war to a land where you can live in peace. It makes new think I love it and look forward to reading more of your work.
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:21 AM
wow! You have a deep heart and a very broad mind Laura... Your words sink in truth and gross understanding from the break down of your complete assimilation. What more can I say... You have said it all and even more. Thank you for your visit. it is lovely reading from you.
Das Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 12:02 AM
On the threshold of marriage deliberating the uncertainties, the responsibilities and the joys. Wonderful WRITE . A #7.
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Yes Nandita... Your comment is the perfect summary to my lines. Thank you a million
La France Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 11:54 AM
Funom, yes it is scary to take that step into marriage, a very different life awaits, you have penned a lovely poem 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, fluttering feather
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:18 AM
You just said it all... Thank you a million Broken Wings
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 11:39 AM
With marriage two become one and life takes a couple on a new journey:-) Hugs Jan xx
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Thank you so much Jan
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