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The Aftermath of the Tempest

Like winds incessant through the night and torrents dumped from darkened clouds, the storm raged on without contrite my anguish hid ‘neath subtle shrouds. A storm like this I’ve never seen in my whole lifetime to be sure when hot converging airs convene; ‘tis more than one should e’er endure. But now at dawn an eerie calm as sun peeks out and shadows cast, and nature sings its Sunday psalm; the mayhem seeming to have passed. Yet as I look around the room belongings scattered everywhere; my treasures past have met their doom, been tossed about without a care. My heart is crushed, left in a void, its pieces scattered on the floor; like trees blown down, my life destroyed as she walked out and slammed the door. October 26, 2020

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Date: 11/20/2020 12:03:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, this sounds like romance to me. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2020 3:34:00 PM
Hello Hohn, you are welcome my friend. enjoy your evening my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/21/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 11/13/2020 5:05:00 AM
A masterpiece dear John, whether, a rain storm a sea storm, a romantic storm which perhaps is through jealousy or divorce, a hurricane, an earthquake, there is an eeiry silence just before and just after, then comes a catastrophic situation in fact, now that I re-read the poem and read that your treasures found their doom, I think it's probably romance. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/14/2020 7:03:00 AM
Hi Jenn, your thinking is correct, I was using a storm as a metaphor for a stormy relationship and when it's over we're left to clean up the mess and pick up the pieces. Hope all is well with you. Hugs, John
Date: 11/7/2020 1:02:00 PM
An excellent write John, some love is like living through a hurricane, but there is peace after the storm has passed!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/8/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 11/7/2020 11:45:00 AM
Rather fine piece John, nice rhyme and flow too. Really enjoyable! Hope all is good with you, blessings,Gordon
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/7/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Gordon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/5/2020 10:10:00 AM
Memorable penning here -- 'and nature sings its Sunday psalm;'... 'as she walked out and slammed the door.' Worthy of Shakespeare's play by the same name, 'The Tempest.' Lovely done, John. Happy Thursday, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/5/2020 1:50:00 PM
Gershon, I appreciate your thoughts and comments so much, thanks for stopping by. Have a good evening. John
Date: 11/1/2020 6:29:00 AM
This is such a inspiration from your pen. A fave for me ... so sad, yet incredibly alive with your passionate pen. God bless you my friend
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/1/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Gina, and thanks for saving it to your favorites. John
Date: 10/31/2020 6:05:00 AM
WoW! John, You penned such a well written poem on how one would feel after the devastation of storm. Good content, rhymes and imagery. Great comparison on ones personal life and actual storm. If this is for a contest, I wish the best of luck.Excellent job. Happy Halloween my friend:-) Alexis Soupmail
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/31/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Alexis, I appreciate you. Happy Halloween to you! Hugs, John
Date: 10/30/2020 11:29:00 PM
Wow John! I see in your conversations with other poets that this poem is fiction, but it’s so well done that you had me convinced that you really did go through some kind of storm, be it a literal hurricane or a break-up!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/31/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jennifer, I appreciate it. I did go through a nasty divorce forty years ago and I am able to draw on those past feelings when I need to. Thanks for the visit. John
Date: 10/30/2020 2:56:00 PM
We get over the loss of "things" faster than the loss of a loved one, John. I'm wondering if you were writing about one of the hurricanes this year. Maybe there were some effects in Texas? I like the way you described the damages before you mentioned the woman had left. Sorry there are voting problems in Texas too. Thanks for your visit. Hugs, Carolyn
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/30/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Carolyn, I actually wrote this for Craig’s After the Hurricane contest; I had a different take on the theme. Texas was pretty much spared this summer but Louisiana had a tough season. Thanks for the visit. Hugs, John
Date: 10/28/2020 3:51:00 PM
The aftermath and realization is when it hits the hardest. Powerful and well written John, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/28/2020 5:53:00 PM
Been there, done that...but that’s was a long time ago. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Emilia. John
Date: 10/28/2020 4:20:00 AM
Well, sad one at the end. I hope just a work and not the present situation in your life or maybe the aftermath in a friend's life. Sara
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/28/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sara. This poem is fiction, written for a contest. All the best to you. John
Date: 10/27/2020 9:11:00 AM
"The Aftermath" indeed. Oh my !! This is deep, powerful and emotional- all at the same time. A storm moves all around and in the process, the heart gets broken. You have created a Masterpiece here with your words. Well done my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/27/2020 10:03:00 AM
Thank you for placing your thoughts an my poem, Brandy, I appreciate you and your support. I wouldn't say this is a masterpiece, just my simple thoughts put into verse, but thank you for the compliment. Hugs, John
Date: 10/26/2020 6:02:00 AM
Wasn't expecting that ending John, I thought it would be calm after the storm You had me thinking of hurricanes and tornados until the end. Well written, hope alls well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/26/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I'm glad you liked my little twist at the end. Hope all is well with you and yours. John

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