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The Adventures of Jim the Trim-At the Beach

On this tropical beach, one hot summer day
Jim the Trim came, his bod to display
Been workin’ out day and night
Made the girls' eyes burn bright
Next, he's running from muscles that sashay





KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
10 April 2015

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Maurice Yvonne

April 15, 2015 at 3:54 PM

You write a great Lime Ricky Kim! Love it!

Wally Flint

April 14, 2015 at 9:10 PM

Funny! Nice one Kim!

Jack Ellison

April 12, 2015 at 8:18 AM

Okay, this one tickled me! LOL 7+++ Big huggsies, Jack xxx

Joseph May

April 11, 2015 at 9:49 AM

A great limerick Kim....enjoyed

James Horn

April 11, 2015 at 7:41 AM

So if the guys are all really gays, Do you think God gives them much praise? Or is it something in our system that is incrusted and our life styles need to be adjusted? Married 50 years on August 27, 2016. Jim Horn

Kp Nunez

April 11, 2015 at 8:41 AM

James, the limerick per definition, is a five-line, often humorous and ribald poem with a strict meter. Mine does not aspire to make a lament nor critique or endorse being gay as a sexual orientation. What you see is what you get in my limericks, just poke a fun at realistic albeit quite exaggerated just a bit, slice of life. Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. All the best. Kim