Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

The Adventures of Jim the Trim - With a Lady

Now, Jim is a guy who cultures
                              His zest for and boasts of his adventures
                                      But won't tell he met a lady
                                      He bowed down so gallantly
                           That both of them had to catch his dentures.











KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
19 March 2015

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Nandita Das May 5, 2015 at 10:54 PM Lol...poor Jim. Very creative. Great powers of imagination. Great humor. Thanks for the laughs #7

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2015 at 5:11 PM Creative use of the Limerick form..I enjoyed reading t his one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2015 at 6:03 AM This made me smile, I bow before you with teeth firmly in tact.

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2015 at 11:12 PM haha, the last line was a chuckle!!!

William J. Jr. Atfield March 21, 2015 at 11:43 AM I guess he was trying to take a bit out of life ( adventures ) ?, and lost it .

Maurice Yvonne March 21, 2015 at 5:43 AM Two words! Super Glue! Very Funny, love this wonderful festive write, thank you. Love, Armand.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2015 at 7:32 AM - Love your limerick .... big smile and big 7 - I wish you a beautiful weekend, dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau March 19, 2015 at 11:35 PM This write IS quite humorous dear poet ! I enjoyed ! Another Cary Grant I see..... ;).....have a wonderful week ...... much love, james

David Meade March 19, 2015 at 9:42 PM Watch out for a man with removable teeth -- amazing things he can do! Loved the limerick, reminded me of my grandfather, I always saw his soaking in a jar in the bathroom! Grandma was always smiling though. 7

Emile Pinet March 19, 2015 at 8:18 PM Well done, with a sense of humor and a quick wit. I'm sure everyone got a chuckle from it. Emile.

Jack Ellison March 19, 2015 at 5:18 PM Loved it my dearest Kim! LOL I agree with Terry... you are a beauty! Why haven't you shown us before!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx

Jan Allison March 19, 2015 at 4:57 PM this made me smile - still have my own teeth lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud March 19, 2015 at 3:40 PM lol, panalo... this is humor at its best.. galling ng pinoy, kim.. go!.. huggs

David Brown March 19, 2015 at 3:36 PM Haha, nicely done, a limerick for St Patrick's!