Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

The Adventures of Jim the Trim -Poolside

Now, Jim the Trim, you already know him
                               He went to the pool, and there he met Kim
                                      He approached where she lays
                                      Thought he’d score for the day
                         Where’s Jim? Knocked out, by prim and proper Kim!









Thank you Arthur V, for lending Eve and Steve's pool!


KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
28 February 2015

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Richard Lamoureux March 30, 2015 at 9:06 AM Ha ha, love it!

William Gray March 6, 2015 at 4:17 AM Hi Kim!. What a great title. Loved this piece. Regards my friend!. Kp Nunez March 6, 2015 at 4:29 AM Thanks William! Glad you liked it! Appreciate much your visit and comment. All the best, Kim :D

Viv Wigley March 4, 2015 at 6:43 AM It seems that Jim, in my book, deserved that cracking left hook for only a fool would do that by the pool and never mind touching- don't look! (splash) Great verse, Kim- need some summery images in this wintery weather. Viv x

Jack Ellison March 3, 2015 at 7:47 PM Gave me a big tickle Miss Kim!!! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx Jack Ellison March 3, 2015 at 8:55 PM "Jack and His CPAP" sounds too much like "Jack and His CRAP"! I order "The Isms of Jack"! LOL Jack Ellison March 3, 2015 at 7:48 PM Oh and I'm a guy!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 3, 2015 at 1:57 AM hahahha cheers to kim!! go! go! go!.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2015 at 6:46 PM YOU GO GIRL. That is what I say to Kim!! Cute note you left to Arthur!!

Cherl Dunn March 2, 2015 at 1:31 PM Dear Kim I'll give you a seven for perfection of humor my dear girl, loved it, just loved it, lol hope you didn't give him a cold pack either Lol again, thanks for your review of my tribute to Mystic Rose and yes she deserve everylast line of this write, cheri

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2015 at 2:53 PM Cute one. Enjoyed reading your humorous work. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Lindsay Laurie March 1, 2015 at 1:11 AM G'day Kim... It seems like a true tale. So, who cops it next, Mike Tyson? Enjoyed your limerick Kim - Lindsay

Kim Shaw February 28, 2015 at 10:29 PM Hi Kim, a great limerick. I really enjoyed it! Hugs, Kim